Spring time ( villanelle)

It is flowery bloom in spring

As beauty adorns Nature and

Today I heard a cuckoo sing.

Innumerable birds are flying

With symphony of colors grand

It is flowery bloom in spring.

Sparrows and parrots are dancing

In this green world like fairyland

Today I heard a cuckoo sing.

Cheery weather and bees humming

With nesting fervor in demand

It is flowery bloom in spring.

Greenish leafy stems are sprouting

As if all pains are in remand

Today I heard a cuckoo sing.

Watching the mystic with darling

We get transfixed by scenic land

It is flowery bloom in spring

Today I heard a cuckoo sing.

@ copyright@ Manoj Krishna Sanyal

Comments: 9

Barbary Chaapel May 9, 2008, 9:56pm EDT

Nice, Manoj. But rather difficult to do, I suspect.

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manoj sanyal May 10, 2008, 1:04am EDT

Thanks Barbary.
I expect lots of postings from you.

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John F Walter May 12, 2008, 6:43pm EDT

Very pleasant to read, manoj. I like your villanelle refrain lines quite a bit.

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manoj sanyal May 12, 2008, 11:45pm EDT

Thanks John for appreciation.

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Esaiah Udhayakumar May 13, 2008, 10:43am EDT

You have created a beautiful world, Manoj!

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manoj sanyal May 14, 2008, 3:15am EDT

Thanks dear for appreciation.

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Richard Melendez May 21, 2008, 5:00am EDT

Manoj... the mind can always use the serenity of spring. Thank you for the calm and beauty of these words.

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manoj sanyal May 21, 2008, 11:31am EDT

Thank you dear for appreciation... I am overwhelmed.
Have nice time.

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Granny Janny H. Feb 11, 2009, 11:06pm EST

I just tried my first. Yours is a lovely song to Spring.

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