by manoj sanyal

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May 5, 2006

Venerated feelings(cinquain)

May 03, 2008 03:44 AM EDT

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Holy

cemetery

as eternal rest place

echo venerated feelings

clearly

Zero

as we take birth

and after worldly gains

we go back to the sacred earth

again

Tags: poetic expression, spiritual, short verse, poetry writing, prose-poetry, random musing, creative musings, poem, thoughts, life, free write, introspection, society, short musings, living

To Groups: .....The Poetry Review....., Cinquain, Light of Poetry, Our Soul Journey, Poet's Passion, Poetic expressions, poetryloverz, Spiritual Living

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Comments: 7

Jim Ross May 4, 2008, 2:20am EDT

Beautiful, Manoj. Sacred is as sacred does. Well delineated in your dual cinquains.

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manoj sanyal May 5, 2008, 12:31am EDT

Thanks Jim for appreciation.

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AiLing K. May 5, 2008, 10:16am EDT

nicely done.

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manoj sanyal May 6, 2008, 4:29am EDT

Thanks Irene for appreciation.

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John F Walter May 12, 2008, 11:27am EDT

Quite a thoughtful poem about consecrated space, manoj. I like the way you adopted the image and idea to the cinquain form.

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manoj sanyal May 12, 2008, 11:46pm EDT

Thanks my friend.

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Dawn K. Nov 12, 2009, 9:31pm EST

dust to dust...

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