Quicksand at Night
The sand is inanimate. It has no soul.
Its speckles of silica and shell swirl
In the gritty Moon-drawn tide,
Rise and fall without pity
According to laws that govern us all.
The wide brown Bay, when the sea has left
Its grooves and whorls,
Settles.
Only gravity, the Earth's spin
And the aimless withering wind
Contend to shape this landscape.
But stand on the wet sand
On a still night until you feel the tug
Telling your feet, your legs, to move
And free themselves...
Stand under motionless clouds and listen:
No wind, no roar, no lap.
Through runnels and rills and rivulets
And between the grains of sand
The tails and hem of the tide
Withdraw at the Moon's command.
Listen as it drains...
At your feet the tiny clicks and ticks
Of each grain as it unsticks, shifts and sticks,
And from the bowl of the Bay
The same, faint, galactic background noise
As cockles close and the bristleworm burrows.
The quicksand's grip and suck is not
The pull of a jealous lover. Its cold
And downward haul is not
The thrall of despair.
The sand is inanimate.
It has no soul.


Comments: 29
Ironically, the little bit of quicksand I was in was in England. Near Cornwall.
Thanks.
"Through runnels and rills and rivulets" ... like this part, how it sounds as I read it out loud... Do you read poetry out loud?
I can feel the sand slipping away beneath my feet, I can smell the sea air so soothing... the warm sun, the breeze on my face and my toes stuck in the wet sand...........
Kristina
I enjoyed this very much.
"Its speckles of silica and shell swirl / In the gritty Moon-drawn tide, / Rise and fall without pity / According to laws that govern us all." Carbon matter-connection. We are as one with the defunct, and the declared universe. Evolved though we be, the moon still works on us.
As always, your work is true. Always rewarding.
Wilka
Congratulations