For an assignment in my Social Studies class, I had to write an essay involving our recent trip to Washington D.C. Out of two essay questions, I picked the question, "What is freedom, and what does it cost?" I just finished the essay, so you can read and comment on it. What do you think freedom is, and what else does it cost? Is the cost worth it?
For generations in this country, we have leaned upon the freedoms harbored by our founding fathers. However, we can often forget what freedom is or what it means to have it. Freedom is the ability to do and choose as one wishes without restriction, be it from government or otherwise.
It is human nature to choose our own paths and follow our own ideas. This want to do what we want can be seen as a want for free will. Many of our founding fathers saw this, among them Lincoln, who we pay homage to at the Lincoln Memorial. He saw all men free and would've liked to see a world where this was true. He helped to shape our government, and this is but one reason we have freedom today.
Humans have many rights, among those a right to be free. The rights of humans cannot and should not be taken away. This is echoed in the Declaration of Independence, housed at the National Archive, which states, "We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness." One can see clearly that humans hold many rights, including equality, freedom, life, and a pursuit of happiness.
To uphold the rights the humans so obviously have, our government has to protect them. While there are plenty of outside threats to our rights, one simple danger comes from within. It is the fear that our own government does not guarantee us our rights. Without the freedom needed to pursue happiness, to control our own lives, and to choose opportunities, reserving our rights is impossible. To protect and secure our rights, the government must always uphold freedom.
In the past, some of those who governed tried to deny people rights. While there were various reasons for the various governments to attempt this, a universal reason was to maintain order. Hitler's regime tried to do this, as one can learn from the Holocaust Museum. They justified this idea by saying that without the ability to do as a person wishes, they cannot commit harm to society. While this is true, people's rights and freedoms are far too important to be sacrificed for order. In fact, sometimes order must be sacrificed for freedom.
No country today allows absolute freedom. I came to understand this after watching the murder-mystery play, Shear Madness. For there to be order in society, and to protect citizens, absolute freedom must be sacrificed. The freedom that we sacrifice is the freedom to harm. Few people find this to even be a freedom, but to deny it means to deny a person's action or choice, and that is to deny absolute freedom. This is one cost to protecting citizens and warding off chaos.
Perhaps the greatest cost of freedom is the cost of lives. It is people like Hitler and the Vietcong that threaten the freedom that humans have a right to. Time and again, the United States has fought not only for the freedom of its citizens, but the freedom of all humanity. We commemorate this with memorials, like the Vietnam Memorial and the Tomb of the Unknown Soldiers. If freedom is to be protected, we must be ready to fight for it.
Freedom is the ability to do and choose as one wishes, without infringing upon the rights of others. The cost of maintaining freedom can be staggering, but it comes with good reason. It means supplying people with the free will that they want and deserve. That, above all things, is of the utmost importance to maintain in a society today where leaders have the liberty to do nearly anything they want. Luckily, our founding fathers, in their wisdom and experience, supplied us with the tools needed to uphold what is most precious to us: the freedom of the citizens of the United States.


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Keep on writing.
"Freedom is the ability to do and choose as one wishes, without infringing upon the rights of others. The cost of maintaining freedom can be staggering, but it comes with good reason. It means supplying people with the free will that they want and deserve." I cut and pasted this comment because it seemed very fitting as I watched the news and read your essay at the same time. Someone tell this to Obama- because last time I looked I wasn't going to church or my husband wasn't hunting out of bitterness.... and my small rural town was expressing any bitterness either.
I would like you to read Invisible Hand a novel I have written about freedom, the threats to it, and how we can make freedom safe and secure with only a small cost. I am very proud of this novel. I spent 18 months writing it and 35 years thinking about it. I offer it to you to read at no cost. Please try it and see if you like it.
Thanks.
It also takes all of us going to the voting booth and choosing wisely. Our civil servants also help preserve our freedom when they take the oath to uphold and defend our constitution and then actually follow through with just actions.
Thank you for your thoughtful essay. Keep on writing and keep on thinking.
"If freedom is to be protected, we must be ready to fight for it."
I am glad that you can see that. Many people tend to forget this and think it is something that is their right but forget how they got that right.
In your third from the last paragraph, use a semicolon instead a comma after wishes.
Although I know what you are trying to say in your your last two paragraphs, I find it wordy and confusing. Consider reworking your concluding paragraphs using Ben Franklin's famous quote. "Anyone who trades liberty for security deserves neither liberty nor security."
Franklin's quote is very relevant today. What do you think he meant?
Lots of potential to make a good essay great. Get back to work, and let me know how you did.
I beleive you are ready for John Stuart Mill, "On Liberty", Josh.
Mill speaks as to the why freedom is a good thing. You are ever so much on the right track here.
You very carefully crafted this piece, and you did so very well.
Blessings, and yes, as the others say above...keep writing, you are a natural.
Wilka
a great thing when you mentioned Abraham Lincoln one of
the greatest presidents we have ever had. The Founding
Fathers of America did supply us with what was needed to..
uphold the freedom of the people of the United States.
Earl Warren Cheif Justice of the supreme court 1954............
"I beleive that no one can read the History of our Country
without realizing that the 'good book' and the Spirit of the
Savior, have from the beginning been our guiding geniuses."
Josh you have penned the great Essay on Freedom!! You
will go forward with a clear conscience young man in any and
all that you should undertake. God be with you!!
Just Me
Barbie
In a time that more than half of your income will go to government and you may be considered an enemy combatant at the whim of Homeland Security, it is good to see that someone is looking at freedom.
I have put my life on the line for this country and 560,000 men died for a lie.
If you don't know what your rights are, you don't have any!
Freedom of choice is still a dream for many.
The reality of life in the US has a way of eroding and nipping away at our dreams.
This essay lacked the clear and strong voice you showed you possess in your West to East article. Maybe it is because you are still young, but somehow I had the feeling you wrote what you felt was expected of you. ...and yes, parts of it read like a jumble of words with no conviction or clarity behind them.
Sorry, Josh:) I do think you are a great writer, but this piece isn't it by a long shot. Boring and fuzzy - where is your enthusiasm?
I just wanted to say I am finally going through my currently over 6,000 pieces of gather new mail that is in my inbox on here. So with that in mind I have finally come to a piece of mail that was addressed to me in regards this article submission you have created to share with the gather community. Thank you for taking the time and sharing your piece with us here at gather. :o)