"Collision Unpretty" ~ Snippets Version by...

Comments: 18

Larry H. Apr 13, 2008, 4:52pm EDT

Thanks for sharing..

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~*~Nina~*~ R. Apr 13, 2008, 4:55pm EDT

Very nice! You're really good!

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Glome . . . Apr 13, 2008, 5:02pm EDT

Can't believe you came up with something that good that fast.

René Allen Jul 1, 2009, 2:02am EDT

Smiles ~ Thanks Glome.

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René Allen Apr 13, 2008, 5:59pm EDT

Thank you Larry and Nina!

Working on more . . .

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René Allen Apr 13, 2008, 6:02pm EDT

Hi Judy ~ It was the inspirational spark from Sue that helped me along ~ lol

Inspirational sparks do wonders for my creativity. They are like FUEL that doesn't cost any money. {laughing}

Blessings ~
Rene

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Renee (Pres of Baby James Foundation) ~. Apr 13, 2008, 6:25pm EDT

Very nice

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Linda K. Apr 13, 2008, 7:17pm EDT

I like seeing where the spark takes you.

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René Allen Apr 14, 2008, 7:56am EDT

Thanks Renee and Cassandra!

Linda ~ The spark is always an adventure isn't it! {smiling}

Thanks to you ~ Sue! Thank you for the spark of inspiration for this poem. The FULL VERSION is around too! It just isn't in Snippets.

Blessings ~
Rene

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Patricia F. Apr 14, 2008, 8:14am EDT

I love this, Rene! Brilliant poem!

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Frog Catcher Apr 14, 2008, 9:13am EDT

Rene, you are very talented!

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Sandy R. Apr 14, 2008, 3:01pm EDT

Very potent~

Wonderful...

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René Allen Apr 14, 2008, 4:16pm EDT

Thank you very much Patricia, F.C. and Sandy. I really appreciate your feedback.

I look forward to reading your Snippets!

Blessings ~
Rene

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Jennifer N. Apr 16, 2008, 5:06am EDT

Amazing imagery Rene.

I have issues creating good imagery with so few words. I'm spoiled by having novel-length fiction to work with, lol.

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René Allen Apr 27, 2008, 7:56am EDT

Thanks Luann and Jen. You're not doing too bad with the IMAGERY Jen! ~ lol

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Jennifer N. Apr 27, 2008, 6:40pm EDT

Thank you Rene. I'm learning. I've always been up for a CHALLENGE. What's more challenging than creating meaningful imagery with 30 words or less when I'm used to having more than 50,000 words to do the same?

Hehehehe.

I still have a few more snippets here, though one I'm waiting on posting until I have a picture or drawing to post with it.

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