Anticipation to a prelude
with doves flying through a
cloudy day.
A world ends between
reality and illusion.
Mindless thoughts allowing
our conscience to walk in
search of life itself.
Enlightenment has been portrait
as a journey for the a soul,
in reality it is written,
unselfish prediction toward
life will open your eyes pass
the unknown and bring you,
full circle with afterlife.
Sublime moon prolong
our clarity and let us see
what is in front of a foggy night
bringing creatures from another
dimension seeking sinful escapes
with helpless souls.
Reality strikes the midnight
hour with no way out.
Suddenly...
Wisdom comes pouring down
allowing us to feel true love
for once, fearful thoughts
cannot force us to deny
our rightful path with faith.
Blessings form above
are lock in a golden box,
ready to be disperse.
Tearful plea for
true believers
walking step by step
pursuing salvation...
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By: RONY JOSEPH
© RONY JOSEPH, All rights reserved


Comments: 3
"the unknown an bring you," - again, is that supposed to be and?
"Wisdom comes poring down" - pouring
Sorry if I sound nitpicky, but all of your poetry is so lovely that I have no way of really commenting except pointing out spelling errors. :P And it gets monotonous saying the same things about it every time...hehe. But, like always, the images are gorgeous and the work is so well put together!
"Reality strikes the midnight // hour with no way out." -This line is the one that stuck out to me this time. It's beautifully written and it's a very intriguing way of describing it. :D
God Bless