On a perfect dream
his silhouette walks
along our fears.
On a constant pressure
doors will begin to
close at your feet
A new beginning
on your mind will unfold.
Infinite circles speaks
of an endless purity.
A clear breeze embrace
a significant odyssey
between good and evil.
I am eternally yours,
seeking the water of life
with my eyes wide open.
Effortless promise will
echoes on a our city steps
with an immense beauty
laid beneath a new world.
Courage under a sunrise
inviting you to a prelude of faith.
Measure your tribulations
by holding to a promise
of a glorious enchantment,
mesmerizing of a splendor
colours alluring your thoughts
in front of heaven gates...
Rony Joseph
RONY JOSEPH All rights reserved 2008


Comments: 11
Two i's in infinite.
Mesmerizing of a splendor...not an
I suggest that you lose the periods and the caps or otherwise put all caps on the first word of each line.