by Robert - just a simple man - B.
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April 12, 2007

SPRINGTIME (my first cinquain)

April 08, 2008 01:42 AM EDT (Updated: April 08, 2008 03:51 PM EDT)
views: 197 | rating: 9.9/10 (33 votes) | comments: 28

Springtime

©'08 R C Burnham

Springtime

Happy Faces

Weather to make you drool

Adventures wrapped in greenery

Frolick!

 

  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
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Comments: 28

Lawrence J, H. Apr 8, 2008, 2:46am EDT
great photo
Lydia aka Freedom's Daughter Apr 8, 2008, 2:54am EDT
Hi Robert, I've never written a cinquain and don't know the rules, but I do know this is lovely. "Adventures wrapped in greenery" is a great line. And the photos are a pretty addition. Streaker, always having herself a good time :)
Jan S. Apr 8, 2008, 2:58am EDT
Lovely poem. Hello, springtime!
J W. Apr 8, 2008, 3:03am EDT
good job
DIANE D. Apr 8, 2008, 5:10am EDT
So much beauty here, in the poem and the photo's.
John Philipp Apr 8, 2008, 8:44am EDT
Robert, I don't know from poetry, but I know from what I like and I liked this.

Thanks.
Nana to Seven Cutiepies Apr 8, 2008, 9:55am EDT
I'm clueless as to what is right and wrong but this is wonderful! Pictures tell such a wonderful story, make you use your imagination, cause you to dream and wonder and look forward to the next opportunity to use the camera again.
Sophiya S. Apr 8, 2008, 9:59am EDT
lovely
Vera B. Apr 8, 2008, 10:48am EDT
very nice cinquain...learned something new today, Thanks!
Karolyn Q. Apr 8, 2008, 1:01pm EDT
This was beautiful Robert! I love seeing Streaker too!

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necee t. Apr 8, 2008, 2:01pm EDT
very good Robert... i enjoyed this... the pictures are beautiful...
Streaker is sooo cute... i'm glad spring is here... Blessings to you Robert...
Marie J. R. Apr 8, 2008, 5:35pm EDT
I like this too ,,, good job,,, love the pictures,,, feels like freedom,,, Bless you my dear,,,
Laura T. Apr 8, 2008, 7:09pm EDT
a great springtime montage. i've always liked photos of the singular tree. xoxox ~laura
Alie Y. Apr 8, 2008, 7:10pm EDT
Pretty!! I love spring!
Susan Roberts Apr 9, 2008, 12:35am EDT
I LOVE to see your dog in the pictures, she just seems to "make" them all look so great. GOD BLESS
Mary Beth Magee Apr 9, 2008, 2:11pm EDT
Thoroughly enjoyed both the verse and the images, Robert. Great job. You may have carved yourself a whole new niche here, my friend!
pamela r. Apr 10, 2008, 7:50pm EDT
I see streaker got herself in the limelight again--she's such a cool dog and enhances the poem's line about "adventures wrapped in greenery"---very very nice.
Randi B. Apr 10, 2008, 9:29pm EDT
Great job I like this kind.
Your loving sis
Good-bye A. Apr 11, 2008, 5:55pm EDT
Looks like a perfect welcome to spring.
AiLing K. Apr 12, 2008, 9:03pm EDT
Beautiful cinquain! Is spring here yet? It seems like winter is not ready to let us go yet:)
Elise w. Apr 13, 2008, 12:05am EDT
Great Cinquain Robert! I especiall like "Weather to make you drool" and "Frolick." Very good!! :-)
jackie s. Apr 13, 2008, 8:56pm EDT
Once again, the dog takes the prize!
Bethany C. Apr 23, 2008, 2:10pm EDT
Lovely!
strongthrufight E. Apr 23, 2008, 6:16pm EDT
Beautiful! but you left out the sneezing, sniffles, and coughing too :P

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