by eric young
Member since:
February 5, 2008

a promise to keep - by eric young

April 06, 2008 08:17 PM UTC
views: 0 | comments: 10
she said she loved me
and always would
i saved my soul for her
i gave my soul to her

she said she'd love me
and she always did
i saved myself for her
i gave myself to her

she said she trusted me
but never did
i saved my love for her
i gave my love to her

she said she'd hurt me...
... and always does
but i'll save myself for her
because i gave myself to her

Comments: 10

leann l. Apr 6, 2008, 8:38pm UTC
deep and emotional i love it
Bethann K. Apr 6, 2008, 10:46pm UTC
Excellent! Bravo!
René Allen Apr 6, 2008, 11:03pm UTC
Strong emotions stirred up within a "gift" laced with honestly make for soul stirring and spiritually transforming moments in time.

No one could have said this better than you Eric.

I applaud you without sound.

Blessings ~
Rene
Renda B. Apr 8, 2008, 4:21pm UTC
Sometimes love can be so devastating.
no,... really???
elizabeth evans Apr 8, 2008, 6:52pm UTC
...and so the love spirals on
Crotalus atrox Apr 9, 2008, 10:15pm UTC
Hey, I have to come back to this one again and tell you how much i like it. I actually put it in my journal! I just think it's great!
Ashley P. May 27, 2008, 9:38pm UTC
Very nice thought. The greatest gift in life is giving love. Great job.

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