by Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom'
Member since:
April 25, 2007

Rainbow Notes ...

April 03, 2008 04:07 AM EDT (Updated: April 03, 2008 01:18 PM EDT)
views: 130 | comments: 34
 

An aura with each shade and  mood

He, walking on the land of words

Finding Solace, attaining peace

Giving reasons to smile on the dashboards

 

Like a sun-bird, singing the praise song

Marching towards the day, he reflects sharp

Like a rainbow he is back with a new shine

Playing the seasonal tunes from the magical Harp

 

Sometimes 'Blue' is his unwanted color

But soon tossing it into the sea of forgiveness

He chuckles with the laughter of Yellow

Whenever he is seen, He is a 'Rainbow' of happiness

 

 

( This is dedicated to William Dotani  who is undoubtedly a great connection, an intelligent writer, a humorous,sensible person, an appreciating commentator and a happy-jolly fellow...)

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Comments: 34

Heidianna "Coriander" T. Apr 3, 2008, 4:35am EDT
Love the picture, and your poem encapsulates the picture perfectly. Beautiful words!
Pepsie J. Apr 3, 2008, 6:08am EDT
This is so uplifting, just like you!
penni d. Apr 3, 2008, 7:23am EDT
The poem is cool, the dedication is GREAT!! :)
Cheryl W. Apr 3, 2008, 9:20am EDT
Wonderful poem, Bhawana!
KC Klein Apr 3, 2008, 11:18am EDT
Nice touch, Buzzy.

I don't care for the ALL CAPS for emphasis, preferring italics.
Phyllis R. Apr 3, 2008, 12:23pm EDT
Beautiful, just beautiful and a love dedication to your great connection!
You are a very creative writer, - all your words just flow so smoothly!!
Kay M. Apr 3, 2008, 12:27pm EDT
Such a lovely poem for a friend. I like to see the blues tossed into the "sea of forgiveness". The picture is perfect for the poem. Now we can imagine William conducting a colorful and happy symphony.
Peter Joseph Swanson Apr 3, 2008, 1:14pm EDT
You are a wonderful poet and William is a fabulous Gather personality !!!
Kathy W. Apr 3, 2008, 1:57pm EDT
Lovely image, great and wonderful words to describe a Rainbow-Renaissance kind of Gentleman. Your tribute does him proud, and was a pleasure to read.

As always, Ms. B
Blessings on you, your family, and your rich assortment of friends.
Wilka
Kathryn E. Apr 3, 2008, 2:07pm EDT
What a great tribute to William, Bhawana and a lovely, lovely poem.

Your poem is Featured in the Triple Name Club.
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Apr 3, 2008, 2:14pm EDT
Thank you all for appreciating my poem.It's written for a fine man so this seems beautiful.

Thanks Kathryn ...what an honor.
Donald M. Apr 3, 2008, 3:11pm EDT
William is a good person to be connected to. He can take you to the land of oz. Write wonderful poetry of friendship and love.
Your poem was a great one for sure Bhawana. You give every one else so much credit, but please take credit for having so much talent.
Marge H. Apr 3, 2008, 3:13pm EDT
Love it Bhawana! It's such a delightful and accurate portrayal of our dear William.
William Dotani Apr 3, 2008, 3:55pm EDT
I am humbled and can only say how thankful I am for such sweet verse.
necee t. Apr 3, 2008, 4:44pm EDT
oh sweet Bhawana... this is soo lovely for our friend, William..
he is a jolly fellow... Blessings to you always...

thank you for all your sweet comments... love you


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Granny Janny H. Apr 3, 2008, 5:36pm EDT
What a happy and colorful tribute to William. I wonder if he plays the harmonica? Thanks for posting to The Poet's Weekly Muse!
Sheila Deeth Apr 3, 2008, 5:50pm EDT
Seems a very appropriate picture! Lovely poem Bhawana. Lovely tribute.
Ellie !. Apr 3, 2008, 6:21pm EDT
beauty is as beauty does. Good job, Beauty! Hey, there's another B for you! Beautiful Bhawana Busy Bee
Alison Pearce Apr 3, 2008, 6:31pm EDT
Beautiful!
Wilma M. Apr 3, 2008, 7:14pm EDT
Lovely, colorful poem for William. Good job, Bhawana.
Lawrence U. Apr 3, 2008, 9:41pm EDT
Lovely poem, Bhawana! What a wonderful tribute to William, the great Gather personality!
Beryl Singleton Bissell Apr 3, 2008, 11:45pm EDT
Rainbow notes . . . how appropriate. That little conductor seems to have made it onto your dashboard. How did he manage that?
Paula Love Apr 4, 2008, 12:17am EDT
awwww a dedication to our great friend William, how nice of you.
Jim Ross Apr 4, 2008, 12:19am EDT
Your poem relays the rainbow of happiness, Bhawana, and leaves this reader joyful and in a mood to put on some good, colorful music. Thank you for that.
Maureen Sullivan Stemberg Apr 4, 2008, 12:43am EDT
BBB. Wonderful job!! I love the words you use & the rainbow a *perfect & fitting picture to go along ...great imagery. It made me smile... a lot. Lovely that you did this as a tribute.~ mo-zy
Parul S. Apr 5, 2008, 2:54pm EDT
you paint a perfect picture of the rainbow and the one that William brings to gather.....all go hand in hand - your peom, your picture and your dedication of it to William.
Marie J. R. Apr 5, 2008, 4:42pm EDT
I love this article Bhawana,,, you do have a way,,, Bless you,,,
Deb J. Apr 6, 2008, 9:54am EDT
Good morning dear sweet Bhawana my friend!! He really is good, isn't he? How have you been? I have been doing better. I think Spring is finally arriving here in Michigan!! Yay! I love it...I am so sick of snow and cold! You take care and keep writing your wonderful articles!! :o)
Elsie Duggan Apr 7, 2008, 2:06pm EDT
This is just lovely Bhawana , and I am sure that William appreciates this dedication, as he has stated above. You are a generous and kind person, I know that part, personally, and I am sure you did the picture too , which is wonderful by itself. A good friend too,
Rony J. Apr 16, 2008, 10:36pm EDT
Wonderful write, amazing words
Thank you for sheering
God Bless
Jerri H. May 11, 2008, 12:22am EDT
Very good!
Kushal Poddar Jul 4, 2008, 8:13am EDT
a most wonderful poem, dear friend

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