by Amber M.

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My Love, My Fear, My Demise

April 02, 2008 11:35 PM EDT

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My Love, My Fear, My Demise

The things I do, do you know why?
It's enough to make me cry.
Everyday I see you here,
But all I ask is you close near.
I ask for love, but you can't see,
You don't know it's hurting me.
So yet again I shed a tear,
You are now my biggest fear.
So I go home, I dry my eyes,
I bid farewell, its my demise.

Amber Moore

Tags: poem, my love, my fear, my demise, emotional, poetry

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Comments: 14

Vivian P. Apr 2, 2008, 11:39pm EDT

very sad poem

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Beth - Doing God's work Daily J. Apr 3, 2008, 12:01am EDT

very sad..

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Stacie N. Apr 3, 2008, 12:56am EDT

Thank you for sharing this with us.

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David W. Apr 3, 2008, 10:16am EDT

melencholly, but nice rythim.

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Rose H. Apr 3, 2008, 10:49am EDT

Sounds like a whole lot of hurtin' goin' on.

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Amy H. Apr 3, 2008, 1:54pm EDT

A wise person once said. Today is the first day of the rest of your Life!

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Amy H. Apr 3, 2008, 1:55pm EDT

I gave it a 10. I comment back!

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Heidianna "Coriander" T. Apr 4, 2008, 3:05am EDT

Well written! I love the opening and the closing, and how it comes back around.

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Sheila Deeth Apr 11, 2008, 3:39pm EDT

Sad. Nice structure.

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J R B. May 5, 2008, 3:04pm EDT

You see us here and do not ask us for help. Please ask, do not go away crying.

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Glome . . . Aug 29, 2008, 12:13pm EDT

10

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Dawn Clevenger Sep 16, 2008, 6:41am EDT

Congrats on being our spotlight of the night!

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