by Rony J.
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February 26, 2008

Witness

April 03, 2008 08:24 AM EDT (Updated: April 19, 2008 11:55 AM EDT)
views: 51 | rating: 10/10 (11 votes) | comments: 11

Amongst us

shadows gradually

corrupting our 

piece and mind.

I'm emotionally disturb.   

As I walked blindfolded

through a valley

of death souls

leaving your serenity 

with tears suddenly purifying

our true self.

Ambiguous feelings

of despair with false

pretends by an

unthinkable source.

Underneath

our aspirations

lays deception,

sinful escapes has my

inner sanctum,

torn in half.

Merciful father,

please send,  

Whispers in the air

Son...

You're not alone

swiftly, 

I hear a voice...

Summons...

An Army of Angels

pouring a force,

within clouds,

an instance.... 

Heaven gates

finally opens

revealing an

splendour fire

wrapping my body

with wisdom

beyond measure...

Rony Joseph

RONY JOSEPH   All rights reserved   2008

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Comments: 11

Bert Van Essen Apr 3, 2008, 8:30am EDT
Isn't it wonderful poetry can speak words that just writing them out in prose don't speak as well! Thanks for the thoughts and hope.
Amber M. Apr 3, 2008, 8:37am EDT
I Love it
Jessie B. Apr 3, 2008, 8:40am EDT
So let me see if I got this right you have to go through hell to get to heaven? I like your words I can see the journey.
Cheryl W. Apr 3, 2008, 9:15am EDT
Wonderful free flowing poem, Rony...:)
Good-bye A. Apr 3, 2008, 9:30am EDT
You asked and received.
Tina W. Apr 3, 2008, 9:39am EDT
Good one
Charity M. Apr 3, 2008, 10:58am EDT
((( Spirit of the Holy Divine Spirit...flood thoughts...as legions of angels come at a moments notice...)))
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Apr 3, 2008, 11:49am EDT
Flawless and how pure.
René Allen Apr 4, 2008, 8:37am EDT
Deeply Moving to the place of LIGHT!

Excellent Poetics Rony.

Blessings ~
Rene
*Holly *. Apr 4, 2008, 11:18am EDT
Very wonderful Rony.
Shelbia C. May 27, 2009, 10:58pm EDT

I liked this

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