by Rony J.
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February 26, 2008

Look Inside My Heart

April 01, 2008 08:06 PM EDT (Updated: April 18, 2008 10:49 PM EDT)
views: 216 | rating: 10/10 (24 votes) | comments: 17

On a long day

intentionally I drift to

another Universe,

where meaningful thoughts

randomly feel oppressed by

an unpredictable image.

Holding to a glimpse of hope

announcing an arrival of

bones cracking at a

sound of a wave,

Perhaps your thoughts  

are trapped inside and

imaginary realm unleashing

real memories to a cloudy day. 

Blissful horizon,

come soon,  please 

take me away, with

predictable illusions  

claiming your past struggles,

Make your peace...

As I walked backwards

pondering at

the edge of cliff,

feeling pressures of

lifeless moments torturing

a transparent circle

on a long journey

coming to an end.... 

Rony Joseph

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Comments: 17

Lisa J Apr 1, 2008, 8:10pm EDT
Wonderful poem.
Good-bye A. Apr 1, 2008, 8:18pm EDT
Very sad, if I am reading this right.
Mark M. Apr 1, 2008, 8:27pm EDT
Thanks for the glimpse Rony.
-Mark
Katie R. Apr 1, 2008, 9:24pm EDT
Very good poem. Thanks for sharing it.
Marie J. R. Apr 1, 2008, 9:27pm EDT
well done my dear,,,
Cheryl W. Apr 1, 2008, 11:01pm EDT
Beautiful writing here, Rony.
RBW C. Apr 2, 2008, 3:28am EDT
well well... i hope that long journey is ended...
René Allen Apr 2, 2008, 7:43am EDT
You are a Literary Talent walking on a poetic path at the moment.

Very nice Rony.

Blessings ~
Rene
Rony J. Apr 2, 2008, 8:20am EDT
This is not end, it's just a hello to whole world
God Bless You and thank you
Amber M. Apr 2, 2008, 9:42am EDT
Interesting and thank you for sharing
I really liked this part:

"Blissful horizon,

come soon, please

take me away,"
Jennifer N. Apr 2, 2008, 8:48pm EDT
Rony this is beautifully executed. I think that many of us can relate to this one.
Svetlana Goryacheva Oct 6, 2008, 9:58pm EDT
Just great! :-)

Blessings and best wishes - S.
Hilary M. Oct 7, 2008, 12:36pm EDT
nice
Ladybounty ~. Oct 11, 2008, 12:57pm EDT
This is beautiful Rony!
Shelbia C. Aug 26, 2009, 9:20pm EDT
Wonderful poem

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