by Rachel V.

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March 28, 2007

Poem - Antagonize me.

March 28, 2008 03:02 AM EDT

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You tell me yes

I tell you no

You tell me stop

I tell you go

I'm running this way

You're walking that way

We'll go in circles

It's never ending.

You look to the left

When I point to the right

I wanted the day

You gave me the night

As I'm going up

You are going down

A cycle perpetuating

Can we make it stop?

There are certain relationships that are so antagonistic, yet you can't steer clear from them. You know you never will see eye to eye, yet you can't get away, you can't make it stop. It's like a wierd addiction.

This is the poem.

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Comments: 8

Wanda H. Mar 28, 2008, 5:44am EDT

Very good presentation of your thoughts. And it makes the point on it's own. You really didn't need the explanation. Keep writing.

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Sandy (back in Ohio...blah!) Mar 28, 2008, 9:27am EDT

I can relate to this poem in my younger days. Now I just let someone walk away. It is much better dealing with them when people are mopre calm and rational thinking.

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Sarah AKA Morbid Angel Mar 29, 2008, 8:10pm EDT

Interesting!

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Rachel D. Mar 29, 2008, 9:27pm EDT

So true. I had one of those. I finally couldn't take it anymore and divorced him.

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Austin Cushing Mar 29, 2008, 11:39pm EDT

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