Faithfully Yours

Underneath our simplicity

details of another life

were implanted properly

between dreams and reality

Divine forces intervene

carrying a golden box

place on the highest clouds

navigating through time.

Mindless contradictions

arrive on the verge of

fighting yourself with your

own illusions.

Slowly reach as a skyline

invite a rainy day too

celebrate a charismatic

beginning...

Allow you mind to

undress another

night as the stars are falling

a prelude of enlightenment

to a lost soul....

By Rony Joseph

Comments: 27

David S. Mar 26, 2008, 11:29pm EDT

I like it. It has a stream of conscious feel to it, but controlled to the point where you have some fantastic imagery.

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C. Edward Sellner Mar 26, 2008, 11:40pm EDT

Very nice Rony.

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Bert Van Essen Mar 27, 2008, 7:38am EDT

Reminds me of the medieval mystics who searched for God and a glimpse of God. Often the mystics thought the did not do enough to serve God which is sad as they did so much in their spiritual life.

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Mary H. Mar 27, 2008, 2:52pm EDT

Sensitive poetry, very nice

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Charity M. Mar 27, 2008, 3:50pm EDT

((( So much is derived...in your spiritual poetry )))

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René Allen Mar 28, 2008, 7:03pm EDT

Another good one Rony ~ I loved this . . .

Mindless contradictions

arrive on the verge of

fighting yourself with your

own illusions.

Blessings ~
Rene

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Tanya S. Mar 28, 2008, 7:19pm EDT

Wonderful... Thanks for sharing.

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elizabeth e. Mar 28, 2008, 7:44pm EDT

Stream of consciousness meanderings...how wonderful the mind.

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Beth - Doing God's work Daily J. Mar 28, 2008, 9:50pm EDT

Thanks for sharing this wonderful..piece

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April H. Mar 28, 2008, 11:14pm EDT

What an amazing piece

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Haim Kadman Mar 29, 2008, 2:03am EDT

A beautiful poem with much insight, thank you so much Rony.

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Good-bye A. Mar 29, 2008, 6:53pm EDT

The discovery of our true soul coupling with the misunderstandings of our human mind.

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René Allen Mar 1, 2009, 5:16pm EST

Rony ~ This is currently FEATURED in Artistic Minds®

After re-reading this again, I can really feel the POWER of the OPENING of this poetic masterpiece . . .

Underneath our simplicity

details of another life

were implanted properly

between dreams and reality

Divine forces intervene

carrying a golden box

place on the highest clouds

navigating through time.

Mindless contradictions

arrive on the verge of

fighting yourself with your

own illusions.

~ By Rony Joseph

JUST EXCELLENT!

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Rony J. Mar 1, 2009, 5:31pm EST

Thank you for your support
God Bless You

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elizabeth e. Mar 1, 2009, 6:49pm EST

Rony:

Amazing piece...a river of images streaming across my mind.

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Renee (Pres of Baby James Foundation) ~. Mar 1, 2009, 7:03pm EST

Beautiful and Congrats on being featured.

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Rony J. Mar 1, 2009, 7:31pm EST

Thank you
God Bless You

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Rony J. Mar 1, 2009, 7:35pm EST

The true valor begins when you open up the door of your heart to the one we called the Son of Man, and only the them you will see your true calling
God Bless

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