by Kay M.
Member since:
September 1, 2007

A Poem For Penni D.

March 21, 2008 12:25 PM EDT (Updated: March 28, 2008 01:40 PM EDT)
views: 55 | comments: 20

With fire in her eyes

And a ray gun in her hand

She said "I've warned you politicians

Now I"m takin' back this land

The rays from my truth gun

Will make you start confessin'

When you lied to this gal

You didn't know with who you were messin' "

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Comments: 20

Vivian P. Mar 21, 2008, 12:36pm EDT
alright I love this one !!!!!!!!!
penni d. Mar 21, 2008, 1:01pm EDT
I'm confessin'...i LIKE your lil ODE,Kay,lol..... made MY day..:)
Apryl Just Apryl Mar 21, 2008, 1:17pm EDT
cute, I just love Penni's style!!
Peter Joseph Swanson Mar 21, 2008, 1:19pm EDT
Marvelous !!!

ha ha
Sunaura *. Mar 21, 2008, 1:25pm EDT
Very good Kay!
Tina Coruth Mar 21, 2008, 1:49pm EDT
Excellent!!
Dan B. Mar 21, 2008, 5:19pm EDT
Very cute, and timely!
J R B. Mar 21, 2008, 5:38pm EDT
Where can I buy a truth ray gun? Want to go to a rally and point it at the speaker.
Melinda ~choosing happiness~ S. Mar 21, 2008, 6:21pm EDT
We all need to begin carrying one of those ray guns! Good one, Kay!
Ellie !. Mar 21, 2008, 9:11pm EDT
how wonderful!
necee t. Mar 22, 2008, 1:03am EDT
aaha very funny... good one...
William Dotani Mar 23, 2008, 3:37am EDT
Sounds like Penni. One of my favorite people on Gather.
Denise E. Mar 23, 2008, 7:22pm EDT
:) clever use of slang to coincide with your rhyme - if you can come up with a real truth ray, I'd be right behind you. :)
Quirky Jessi Mar 25, 2008, 12:58am EDT
Lmao! That's great. I agree with Denise about the slang use.
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Mar 27, 2008, 1:10pm EDT
Kay, you are always too good. Penni and your poem is the best match..
Sheila Deeth Mar 27, 2008, 11:06pm EDT
Very nice!
Karolyn Q. Mar 29, 2008, 8:12am EDT
Very good!
Carol Lloyd Mar 29, 2008, 6:20pm EDT
that is very cute!
penni d. Apr 23, 2009, 10:07pm EDT
Hey... i'm needin' that Ray gun about now, kay. How DARE all those companies take the bail-out money and give it to the fatcat corporate A**es!! Ray Gun, please...
Kay M. Apr 23, 2009, 10:15pm EDT
Go get em' Penni!

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