by Jeff Harrison
Member since:
December 15, 2006

Goodbye Ophelia

March 16, 2008 04:24 AM UTC
views: 0 | comments: 13
Goodbye, not talking to you anymore,
you wont listen anyway
stuck in your illusion
that all is fine
and there is nothing wrong
all is perfect
with glazed eyes
peering at the world outside
as it crawls past....
I am sure you will realize
one time too late
that I had a point
all of those time I tried to yell
STOP!
you wouldn't listen
thinking I was so silly
what the hell would I know anyway?
too bad for me I wont get to say,
"I told you so"
but don't worry,
I will still bring flowers.
Lilies.

Comments: 13

Carol Lloyd Mar 16, 2008, 5:08am UTC
I know several people who fit this description who I bring lilies too. Sad.
Sherry Wight Apr 18, 2008, 2:37am UTC
Wow, nice. But sad.
☆ ƒåitĥ ☆ Apr 18, 2008, 2:37am UTC
Oh WOW... the ending .
Jill~Sexy Back~ V. Apr 18, 2008, 3:10am UTC
very powerful
April H. Apr 18, 2008, 3:12am UTC
Thanks for sharing
Karen R. Apr 18, 2008, 3:31am UTC
Reminds me of someone I know, too.
Richie Montalbo Apr 18, 2008, 3:45am UTC
i like the writing..

i don't like your point..
Lilith Dorsey Apr 18, 2008, 7:36am UTC
The words you choose are very evocative.
Amy P. Apr 18, 2008, 10:57am UTC
Nice one
Kate S. Apr 18, 2008, 1:59pm UTC
Lovely and sad - I have a personal and creative connection to the name Ophelia
Sharon B. Apr 18, 2008, 2:25pm UTC
Thanks for sharing.
Tory H. Apr 18, 2008, 6:40pm UTC
Well written. Brings up interesting thoughts.
Austin Cushing Apr 22, 2008, 12:30am UTC
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