by Tracey W.
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April 21, 2007

Bounce - Acrostic

March 12, 2008 10:29 AM EDT
views: 63 | rating: 10/10 (15 votes) | comments: 20
     

Buoyant and brilliant at parties,

Odette is always the center of the social

Universe.  Her singular

Narcissistic ways are only eclipsed by her

Copious  charms.  All eyes turn to behold Odette as she

Enters a room, her new bosom bouncing in time with her stride.

 

©TSW 2008

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Comments: 20

Zara Stevens Mar 12, 2008, 9:45am EDT
This Odette character sounds fascinating...
Rony J. Mar 12, 2008, 10:14am EDT
reallly good
Tracey W. Mar 12, 2008, 10:59am EDT
Thank you Zara, Rony and Barbra. I appreciate your kind comments. Barbra, I'm glad Odette could tickle you so.
René Allen Mar 12, 2008, 11:02am EDT
Tracey ~ "Bounce - Acrostic" is a new Poetic Form. You've been in "CREATOR" mode here lately Trace. I really enjoy seeing what you will come up with next for us Poetic Masters. You've been inspirational, motivational, and uplifting. WE all thank you!

I just replied to this ~ and again, it went off into cyberspace. So, I'll copy this, just in case ~ lol.

Excellent Poetics Trace!

Blessings ~
Rene
Barbra L. Mar 12, 2008, 11:26am EDT
Oh, dear! I had to laugh outloud, Tracey. This is just 'brilliantly' humorous!!! I really admire your talent for writing these. They are NOT easy to do, and keep to the theme.

Superbly done and I love the font color for the prompt word 'bounce'.
Susan B. Mar 12, 2008, 12:10pm EDT
very clever! lots of bounce :)
Karolyn Q. Mar 12, 2008, 12:56pm EDT
I loved it! Very good.

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sheila ~the hapless housewife~ j. Mar 12, 2008, 2:29pm EDT
Fun poem!

Thanks for posting to Just Poetry!
Otelia S. Mar 12, 2008, 4:18pm EDT
This is great Tracey.
Barbara is right,,,,Not easy to do this,,,believe me....I tried
Thanks for sharing.
Ricky Fico Mar 12, 2008, 5:23pm EDT
It seems new bosoms always provide a "bounce" but perhaps that's in the eyes of the beholder. Very clever, Tracey! Well done, you never cease to amaze me.
Alison Pearce Mar 12, 2008, 5:50pm EDT
Fabulous Tracey!
Autumn Farrington Mar 12, 2008, 6:18pm EDT
Tracey!

I cannot tell you how wonderful I think this is! What an ingenious Acrostic!!! :)
Tracey W. Mar 12, 2008, 7:38pm EDT
Thank you all so much. I had a great deal of fun with Odette and I'm pleased you have enjoyed her as well.
June B. Mar 12, 2008, 8:11pm EDT
Tracy, this is hilarious. WTG
Sheila Deeth Mar 12, 2008, 8:35pm EDT
LOL - nice one Tracey.
Sharon C. Mar 13, 2008, 7:52am EDT
nice one.
Susan C. Mar 13, 2008, 9:21pm EDT
Good poem Tracey. They are not easy to write. Bravo!
Anita R. Mar 14, 2008, 7:45pm EDT
Nice Tracey and very "visual."
Kathy W. Mar 16, 2008, 9:06pm EDT
Odette Bodette! The gorgeous brunette...
She had better look out. Tracey is the life of the party here!
Funny, funny! I didn't expect this--Wham, Bam, Bounce! at the end.
Great, chica. Just great.
Wilka

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