by Rony J.
Member since:
February 26, 2008

Broken Heart

March 09, 2008 11:58 AM EDT (Updated: March 22, 2008 07:49 PM EDT)
views: 55 | rating: 10/10 (10 votes) | comments: 11

Slow motion as mourning mist

wrap around you, willingly pace yourself

as you walk Blindfolded,  I think to myself

where is she with my Bleeding Heart

Wishing to come back and give me one more chance..

As a red sky is approaching an overwhelming

sorrow gets hold of me.

I Thought our love was stronger

What love...?

It was only lust in my mind,

I was all alone  in a box full of tears, 

I felt to my knees, only wishing as I drop to

 a endless abyss

Crushing my bones to another universe...

By  Rony Joseph

RONY JOSEPH    All rights reserved  2008  

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Comments: 11

Brian T. Mar 9, 2008, 1:50pm EDT
This poem conveys a lot of human feeling.
Fran S. Mar 9, 2008, 2:45pm EDT
vivid words for me, great job!
Tina W. Mar 9, 2008, 3:38pm EDT
nice writting
Charity M. Mar 9, 2008, 4:11pm EDT
((( Well, this is a turn towards a deep experience )))
Kim C. Mar 9, 2008, 5:36pm EDT
Very nice. I like it. =0)
Kimber L. Mar 10, 2008, 9:59am EDT
That is sad but well said! Well written! I like it!
Sandy M. Mar 10, 2008, 9:11pm EDT
it was very good
Curt L. Mar 10, 2008, 11:51pm EDT
Super Rony! Sending a 10 your way!
Dee - Nature Babe! Mar 11, 2008, 6:29pm EDT
Rony, super sad but true of love.
Beth - Doing God's work Daily J. Mar 22, 2008, 11:01pm EDT
Thanks for sharing.
Shelbia C. Jun 11, 2009, 1:56am EDT

This is sad, but wonderful

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