by MaryBeth W.

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March 9, 2007

Haiku

March 07, 2008 10:57 AM EST

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Crystaline mist on
Arms held heavily to Heaven
God shines glass rainbows

Tags: storms, journey, nature

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Comments: 10

Charity M. Mar 7, 2008, 11:08am EST

((( AWESOME...I loved the imagery )))

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farr j. Mar 7, 2008, 11:10am EST

Beautiful Haiku.
Here is an attempt by me:
Orange sun,Gray Day
Winters Storm is near
Yet the sleet and rain will stay.

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Cheryl W. Mar 7, 2008, 11:19am EST

This is beautiful, MaryBeth. I can see the colors of the rainbow....:)

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Terry Collett Mar 7, 2008, 3:48pm EST

10 housepoints for this good haiku.

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MaryBeth W. Mar 7, 2008, 6:27pm EST

Thanks all!

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karen v. Mar 8, 2008, 1:08am EST

very powerful imagery ! I read it several times. Thanks for this one !

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necee t. Mar 8, 2008, 2:35pm EST

excellent haiku... great job... Blessings...

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Barb (Gather Site Ferret) Carlson Mar 8, 2008, 6:37pm EST

That's a beautiful image.

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Carole S. Mar 9, 2008, 5:36pm EDT

Great job

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Chasity S. Mar 14, 2008, 6:53pm EDT

great job!

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