Speckled
Egg in pressed grass
Chills while a far killdeer
Cries and laments for a safe-hatched
blue egg
Copyright 2008 Jim Ross
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Jim Ross
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July 9, 2006 Mom's Lament
March 05, 2008 03:11 PM EST
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Comments: 34
Beautifully written!
Thank you, Amy. The antics of a killdeer when a nest is threatened, are heartrending indeed. Your compliment warms me.
Thank you, Lisa.
Thank you, Jen. :-)
Thank you, Becca. Much appreciated.
Thank you, Margo. :-)
Thank you, Sheila. I appreciate your support.
Friend,
CoffeeLady
Thank you, CoffeeLady. I'm glad you liked it. :-)
Sorry, Aunt Boni. I saw this scene as a boy in the marshes of Marin and it has haunted me ever since. Here's a clean hanky.
Sounds good to me, Cecile. Does she sing any better? ;-)
This makes me sad.
Thank you, Charli. I'm pleased that the poem works.
Thanks for taking me back there for a moment.