by Nina A

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ONE FRIDAY

March 04, 2008 06:29 PM EST

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THIS SOLITUDE MAKES ME WEAK, EVEN NOW AS I SHOULD HAVE GROWN AWAY FROM IT.
I WANT TO POINT OUT ALL YOUR WRONGS, EVERYTIME I WEEP,
AND MAKE YOU SOB WITH THIS HURT I CARRY.

YOUR MOUTH IS LIKE A RAZORBLADE,
CUTTING MY SOUL TO PIECES EVERYTIME YOU OPEN IT.

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Comments: 15

Nina A Mar 4, 2008, 6:30pm EST

THIS ONE AGAIN IS ABOUT MY MOTHER.

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Charity M. Mar 5, 2008, 12:56pm EST

((( She sounds...tough indeed )))

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Austin Cushing Mar 28, 2008, 3:59pm EDT

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Steve V. Apr 16, 2008, 12:26am EDT

Great job!

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Amy P. Apr 16, 2008, 12:26am EDT

Thanks for sharing.

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Richie Montalbo Apr 16, 2008, 1:19am EDT

cruel..

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Sherry W. Apr 16, 2008, 1:25am EDT

How heartbreaking. :(

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Faith is ready to be creative and enjoy her life! Apr 16, 2008, 1:35am EDT

That sounds like a bad relationship to be in.

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☆ ƒåitĥ ☆ Apr 16, 2008, 1:40am EDT

This is really sad, I'm sorry.

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Karen R. Apr 16, 2008, 1:48am EDT

That is sad.

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Corina Carrasco Apr 16, 2008, 2:29am EDT

Lots of emotion here.

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Jan S. Apr 16, 2008, 3:40pm EDT

Powerful and tragic. I've been on the receiving end of some pretty cutting comments, too. I've learned to let go of anger and hurt. Carrying it around is like taking poison and waiting for the other person to die.

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Solrac Nekreh Sep 1, 2008, 5:15pm EDT

“ONE FRIDAY” is serious, with its limpid idea, breezy melodic invention and unfussy texture, it has a strongly effective communicative language wich in particular is an event in itself.

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Shelbia C. Sep 1, 2008, 7:00pm EDT

Great writing

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