It started as a picture in my mind: a young woman wallking on a beach with the sun coming up. The beach was wide and long and she was the only person on it. Was she alone by her own choice or because something had happened to her? Didn't she have friends or family? Her aloneness nagged at me.
Oddly, though I had no idea who she was or what she was doing there, I knew to within a few days what the date was – a morning in June 1837. That's because I mostly write about history and my particular interest is the nineteenth century. 20 June 1837 was the day that King William IV died and an eighteen-year-old girl called Victoria woke up to find herself Queen of England and large parts of the rest of the world beside. Which was the last thing in the mind of my lonely young woman on the beach. Our own excitements and troubles blot out what are supposed to be the big events of history – the victories, the defeats, the rises and falls of regimes and the deaths of monarchs.
I liked this young woman, the way she let her hair blow out in the wind without fuss or vanity and the determined way she walked. It wasn't her fault she was alone. Some wrong had been done to her, not by her. Her father had just died. When I thought of that, I knew the beach where she was walking. Calais Sands, on the channel coast of France. Those sands had a black reputation. After duelling was outlawed in England, men intent on trying to kill each other in a gentlemanly fashion would take the short sea voyage from Dover to Calais and meet among the sandhills, with seconds and a doctor in attendance. So her father had died in a duel.
But then, by the nineteenth century, most gentlemen had more sense. Only fools duelled. So did my determined and likeable young woman have a fool for a father? Not possible. Therefore what was in her mind as she walked on the sands was the fact that her intelligent and free-thinking father hated the very idea of duelling and couldn't possibly have died in the way she'd been told.
So that was the start of my story, and as I followed my young woman, Liberty Lane, in her travels I started to realise that the death of an old king and the arrival of a new young queen weren't as remote from her life as she'd thought. But the big events of history and the terrifying things that happened to her were only part of the story. That first picture of loneliness stayed in my mind. I wanted to know how she set about re-building a life for herself, finding friends and things that connected her with the rest of the world again. That's why the story ends with another sunrise and the tentative start of her new life.
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Comments: 27
Seeing how you slowly discovered Victoria and her world has only drawn me in further to the novel that piqued my curiosity last month.
I am still enchanted, and I cannot wait for when my copy of A Foreign Affair arrives. :)
As a reader, your book sounds greatly intriguing to me.
As an aspiring writer, I look forward to the day I can purchase my own copy to read and review.
The muse sure does work in mysterious ways!
I've even had ideas start with a single subject as well. For instance, I saw a single tree in the middle of a farmer's field and this whole story came to me. Within five minutes I knew the tree's story.
Is it a worthwhile story to write? Maybe. Time will tell. For now it sits in my journal with the other 50+ plots waiting for me to finish the novels I already have in progress.
The tree one I mentioned earlier would probably be a beginner chapter book length when done.
I have this hardcover blank journal that I put all of my plots in. I'm pretty organized with it as well. I put the genre possibilities in purple ink at the top, then write the premise in black ink below it. Then I ask some questions. What if is a big one. I list possible angels the plot can go in and then I add in whatever details I see when the idea hits.
Like Sarah, my ideas vary in complexity from a one-sentence idea to a complex half formed plot.
I also tend to carry a pen and paper with me at all times. Often the ideas come to me when in the car (no, I'm not driving, don't worry) and I just jot them down as I see them then. Plot revelations for my current novel often come then, too.
The journal isn't anything terribly fancy. I think it's one that I grabbed for $1 years ago, but it serves it's purpose for me.
Here's a photo of the front of my plot journal, if you are curious
I've learned one thing about myself and that is to never rely on my memory. It betrays me at every chance it gets. Worse yet is that it teases me with just enough information to know I had an idea, but not enough to do anything with it.
I usually harvest an idea from the journal when it comes time for a new novel, however that usually gets tossed aside as another new plot creeps up and vies for the glory of being written.
It's times like these that I wish I was far more prolific in the writing department than I am.
That's one weakness of mine.. NaNoWriMo.
Which leads me to my next point. Being that you do historical novels (I've got one in progress, too (it's a bit over 50,000 words long at the moment) are you a plot outliner or a fly by the seat of your pants writer?
I've found especially with the research heavy novels that I need to plot it all out. I do that with all of my novels, but the ones that require a lot of research seem more reliant on this method than the others have.
Jennifer N, I try very hard to be a plot outliner. I genuinely think that is the better method. But however much plot outlining I do, it always ends up seat of pants flying in the end.
You are an extremely creative and nuanced person and writer ~
I adore your hat ~
I favor hats too ! I find that I gravitate towards wearing "garden party specials" ~
I own a black Italian Straw "job" with a wide brim { I feel so Fellini when I where it }.
Anyway ~
I would be honored and want to thank you in advance if you might be able to find the time to look at my paintings and poetry.
I send this with my warm wishes ~
Madame 'X'
I enjoyed reading about how you've got the idea for the book, and it all makes so much sense. I hope you book becomes a bestseller, in my mind it already is.