by Terry Collett
Member since:
November 1, 2006

MISTAKE.

March 01, 2008 03:20 AM EST (Updated: March 01, 2008 03:22 AM EST)
views: 24 | comments: 8

She was so
Overwhelmed
By his words
That she threw

Herself at
Him and made
A complete
Wide-eyed fool

Of herself
By being
So pretty
In a cool

Party of
Dumbstruck broads
That she slid
Out the back

Way red-faced
And never
Saw the jerk
Anymore.
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Comments: 8

Terry Collett Mar 1, 2008, 3:22am EST
Zama Vanessa (Mrs John Paterson) Helder. Painting Title: Young Girl. Poem by me and my Muse.
vijay kumar Mar 1, 2008, 7:23am EST
Well written poem and a lovely painting.
LaRue B. Mar 1, 2008, 8:28am EST
good for her. I like your writing.
Barbary Chaapel Mar 1, 2008, 8:33am EST
Terry,

I am always fascinated by you and your muse. This is a wonderful "scenario" poem.
All of your work is consistently well written.
Zara' N. Mar 1, 2008, 8:56am EST
You can actually see your words in her expression! Bravo!

Z'
Cheryl W. Mar 1, 2008, 11:52am EST
Good one, Terry. I've felt this way before.
Terry Collett Mar 2, 2008, 2:29am EST
Thank you everyone for your kind feedback.

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