I hate what Flash graphics does to video, this should be
much better quality, but we get back to the refusal of
the web gods to use professional tools.It is perhaps unusual to add a poem to some of the groups I have chosen, but then it is unusual to make a scripted video of a poem. Recently however I had been involved in threads centring on relationships and particularly on self help books offering sex advice.
People do not need sex advice to make a more fulfilling relationship, we are all born knowing how to do IT. What people in the modern, pressure cooker societies of the civilised world need is life advice on how to be. I hope this video in which my wife and I read my poem "We Made Love" as we look back on our long relationship will give a pointer on how we have kept our relation ship fresh and fun filled for over 30 years.
I look at your eyes, still soft, and not yet dulled by weight of years
and recall the days
when our bodies roared
with impetuous passion.And we made love
on tolerant beaches
bathed in salt foam,
clothed in seaweed; or
under the upturned noses of golf-club prudes.And we made loveskyclad on the
pagan hill, offering
our desire to an ancient deity,
defiant as the demagogues
tried to keep us apart.And we made lovein a picnic area
by the side of the road
when more urgent hungers
kept us from our
bread and wine.And we made lovein the midnight portals
of the Town Hall.
Restraint and certain items
of underclothing clothing
discarded on the steps
as the civic lions stood watchAnd we made lovein the quiet of a railway station
while oblivious commuters
passed by us, going home
to abandon the remnants
of another futile day.We made love
while others made fortunes
and pursued illusory happiness
in the security of numbers.
Our fortune lay in laughter shared
and memories we made.
Now
in the mists of autumn
as age gnaws at our flesh
and the forest sheds its colours
the way we once shed inhibitions
your head rests on my shoulder ....I slip my arm around you
and whisper in your ear
should we make love:or would you prefer a cup
of sweet hot chocolate dear ?"
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February 25, 2008 11:46 AM EST
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Comments: 33
Thanks for posting this to Short Story and More!
Thanks for reading / viewing
Thanks, as the poem is based on our experiences you can tell we had our moments :-)
Cocoa was a poetic device, its more likely to be Champagne or Chateauneuf de Pape. We might be past our sell by dates but we still have style.
: - )
So would I, but its a nice phrase for a bit of self deprecation.
You're best at poetry! The second full stanza reminds me of Boticelli's "Birth of Venus". Is this deliberate?
This is really lovely. Instead of ending with the hot chocolate, you could have said something like "a snooze in the garden".
Z'
Beautifully written and I shall go to the video to hear it as well. I'm sure my Parents who have been married now 50 years and 11 months will agree with everything that you have so eloquently written here.
It doesn't need to be fireworks and flash all of the time.
As for the sell by dates... my sweetie and I met with him nearing sixty and me a mere ten years behind... we may not make love with the frequency of youth but the fire is still burning and let's just say public is relative...
Birth of Venus? No the image was not intentional. I think most people have done it on a beach sometime (the warmth, fresh air and the sensuous sussurus I guess)
And we were not actually under the noses of the golf club prudes, they were in the clubhouse, we were in the bushes 300 yards away ;-)
Poetic licence eh?
Thanks
Lord Byron said "Poetry is emotions reflected at leisure." And what better emotions to reflect on.
Just lay off that chocolate body paint OK?
I missed picking up on Ann M's point about a snooze in the garden cos my head is full of a Honda Accord I'm thinking of buying (life intrudes again!!!) but I remember writing this a few years ago and picked choloate to end on as it can sensual and sexy as well as often associaten with cosy middle age.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Congrats to your parents. As Sandy's relationships group does so well I plan writing to it more - but prose mainly I guess - and one of the articles will be on the spiritual significance of the phrase "my other half"
Just what we were saying on the threads about Ian Kerners Sex Detox books.
QED.
As much as I love the physical side (as evidenced by my eighth month of pregnancy), it's the poignant other moments that follow me around daily and fill it with warmth.
My best wishes to you and your wife.
Sex is of the moment, then gone. Memories are all we have of the past.
Chocolate Body Paint, I've heard, only heard mind you, that it is very sickly.
Get ready for a bumper month in March, as we are going for it. I was the first rock and roll poet (others weould dispute that) and will be bringing along some of my back catalogue.
Thanks for looking in.
Nice? YTes I am sometimes.
But today's post is back to more familiar knockabout comedy.