by Rebekah S.
Member since:
May 15, 2007

Dancing Upon the Wind

February 10, 2008 06:19 PM EST
views: 46 | comments: 13

I long to be a butterfly

Dancing upon the wind

Flying high into the sky

Tasting the air so saccharine

 

I long for the time to come

When I break out of this cocoon

To leave these days of tedium

And begin my life anew

 

I shall be an ugly worm no more

But a beauty with colourful wings

And high into the heavens I'll soar

Wherein my spirit shall sing

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Comments: 13

Alison Pearce Feb 19, 2008, 12:29am EST
Beautiful!!!
Mary M. Feb 19, 2008, 9:36pm EST
This is beautiful! Thank you for sharing with us.
Rebekah S. Feb 20, 2008, 10:11am EST
Thank you Alison!

You are welcome, Mary, and thank you for the compliment!
Corina Carrasco Apr 16, 2008, 2:58am EDT
Well done. I'd like to be a cloud, I think.
Karen R. Apr 16, 2008, 3:33am EDT
Very nice.
Infinity M. Apr 16, 2008, 3:46am EDT
This is wonderful - thank you for sharing your talents with us
☆ ƒåitĥ ☆ Apr 16, 2008, 4:04am EDT
Oh wow, this is wonderful! Very heartfelt.
Gil T. Wilson Apr 16, 2008, 4:29am EDT
very nice...but i like being an ugly worm
Roxanne N. Apr 16, 2008, 9:09am EDT
Great job.
Tanya S. Apr 16, 2008, 9:51am EDT
beautiful, thanks
Sherry W. Apr 16, 2008, 9:52am EDT
Wouldn't it be amazing? Great job.
Austin Cushing Apr 16, 2008, 10:10pm EDT
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Rebekah S. Apr 24, 2008, 3:36pm EDT
Corina, Karen, Gail, Faith, Gil, Roxanne, Tanya, Sherry--Thanks to all of you for stopping by and for the positive feedback! I am glad that you enjoyed my poem. :)

Austin--Thank you for sending traffic my way!

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