MIND FLUTTERS

SO MANY LITTLE THINGS BECOME OCCUPANTS OF A BROAD MIND.
SOME MAY FLUTTER AROUND AND EVENTUALLY DISAPPEAR.
YET THERE ARE MINDS THAT DO NOT FORGET ANY OF THESE.
THERE ARE MINDS THAT ARE TROUBLED BY THE MANY WAYS ONE CANNOT RID THE FLUTTERS.
THERE ARE MINDS THAT PACK THESE FLUTTERS INTO THEIR DAYS,
SO MUCH SO THAT THESE MINDS LOSE THE SOUL.
THESE MINDS CREATE MONOTONOUS NEVER ENDING PATTERNS.
THESE MINDS GROUP AND PUSH THE FLUTTERS.
THESE MINDS THINK THEY ARE ACCOMPLISHING MANY THINGS AT ONCE.
THESE MINDS ARE WRONG.
THESE MINDS ARE DOING NOTHING AT ALL. THESE MINDS LOSE.

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Wanda H. Apr 1, 2008, 1:46am EDT

Interesting work. To make it easier to read you might try not using all caps. Online it is hard to read all caps. Overall though, a nice piece.

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Austin Cushing Apr 1, 2008, 1:52am EDT

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☆ ƒåitĥ ☆ Apr 16, 2008, 7:13pm EDT

I feel the same way that Wanda does about the caps.

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Sharon B. Apr 16, 2008, 7:32pm EDT

thanks for sharing

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Steve V. Apr 16, 2008, 7:39pm EDT

Thanks for sharing.

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Amy P. Apr 16, 2008, 7:46pm EDT

I agree with the caps thing.

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Jill~Sexy Back~ V. Apr 16, 2008, 7:52pm EDT

I agree with Faith and Wanda about the caps...it's a bit distracting

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Sherry W. Apr 16, 2008, 8:10pm EDT

Very interesting piece.

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Lilith Dorsey Apr 16, 2008, 9:12pm EDT

This has so much going on.

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Roxanne N. Apr 16, 2008, 9:55pm EDT

Thanks for sharing.

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Austin Cushing Apr 18, 2008, 5:31pm EDT

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Shelbia C. Sep 1, 2008, 7:25pm EDT

I also agree with Wanda about the caps, but I like the piece

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