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Snow Dust (and the True Story)

February 08, 2008 01:01 AM EST

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SNOW DUST (in the Photo)

Snow dust
Skips lane to lane
As tires kick the road
You scuttle away so quickly
Vapors

THE TRUE STORY (of the Photo)

Mother!
Don't drive and shoot-
Camera in one hand
Steering wheel gripped in the other
Fast lane

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Comments: 10

Renee (Pres of Baby James Foundation) ~. Feb 8, 2008, 1:19am EST

I like them both good job

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Alison H. Feb 8, 2008, 1:32am EST

Good ones. Fast lane, lol!

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Alice N. Feb 8, 2008, 3:33am EST

Very good!

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Cecile V. Feb 8, 2008, 12:35pm EST

Wonderful!

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Beth L. Feb 8, 2008, 9:10pm EST

lol VERY Cool!!!!

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Jo C. Feb 9, 2008, 11:08pm EST

This is like those commercials where a professional actor translates the actual words of the untrained actor next to him or her. Very creative, both versions, real and poetic. :)

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Barbara S. Feb 10, 2008, 6:41pm EST

Charli,
Sounds like me. When one of my kids and theirs are riding with me, they just say,"Hang on, Nana's driving". Haven't wrecked yet.
Barbara S.

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Charli Mills Feb 10, 2008, 11:36pm EST

Thanks for stopping by All and commenting!

Cindy--I like that reflection of life's journey and time.

J--I can see that commercial in my mind! That is too funny!

Barbara--see, I haven't wrecked either!

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