by Charli Mills
Member since:
April 21, 2006

Snow Dust (Cinquain)

February 04, 2008 07:58 PM EST
views: 83 | rating: 10/10 (11 votes) | comments: 16
Snow dust
Skips lane to lane
As tires kick the road
You scuttle away so quickly
Vapors
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Comments: 16

Jan D. Feb 4, 2008, 8:18pm EST
Nice poem....pretty much sums it up too. Thanks for sharing.
Vicky Duggins Feb 4, 2008, 8:21pm EST
I don't know anything about poems but I like it.
*LORA* M. Feb 4, 2008, 8:38pm EST
very cool
Great job
Renee G. Feb 4, 2008, 9:10pm EST
Love it! You paint the picture perfectly.
Toni V. Feb 4, 2008, 9:26pm EST
Very nice Charli. Ours will be gone quickly too.
Marianne M. Feb 4, 2008, 9:57pm EST
A wonderful cinquain, Charli! And the photo is perfect. I like the way you connected the first and last lines. I think that can be challenging! Good job!
Charli Mills Feb 4, 2008, 10:21pm EST
Thank you for the comments and the wonderful inspiration am finding among you all.
Beth L. Feb 4, 2008, 10:29pm EST
I love it. Very well done! : )
Jim Ross Feb 4, 2008, 11:39pm EST
Love it, Charli. I can hear the cars and see the airborne, fitful snow dust.
Ann R. Feb 5, 2008, 4:47pm EST
It does have a magical quality about it doesn't it...and so does your poem.
Diana Raabe Feb 5, 2008, 11:47pm EST
This is lovely and perfect, Charli!
vijay kumar Feb 6, 2008, 9:52pm EST
The experience is pictured vividly and beautifully. The words vibrate. Loved the poem, Charli.
Kate Keeley Feb 8, 2008, 12:58am EST
Your words are dancing like the snow.
Charli Mills Feb 10, 2008, 11:41pm EST
Thank you for reading and for the kind comments.
Glenda Bixler Feb 23, 2008, 11:34am EST
Very well done...you are having fun with all of this, aren't you? It shows...

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