Scrabbled scribbled soul yelled seeing itself paled and wrinkled
Kneeled, muddled, crumbled, crippled and grumbled who's failed
The purpled bedazzled flare thrilled and tinkled the unveiled
The shoveled skulled memories are still broiled and sprinkled
The castled youth chuckled, giggled and tangled the jumbled sound
An overboiled ego ruffled and scrambled the prickled wound
Strangled, jailed, foiled with regrets it bawled in encircled bound
The brattled mind rebelled, quarreled and disabled the uncurled mound
Bundled promises crawled and guzzled in search of a fabled night
A misspelled life, strolled it unskilled and led it to a chilled plight
The dwindled word sorry should be emailed in the rekindled light
Life needs to be assembled, sizzled, smelled with love and hugged tight
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Phrases such as castled youth and misspelled life are incredibly rich.
I can see the great writer within you rise out from within you. You hava a rare talent.
Write Bhawana write. As you write your mind will begin to match what's in your heart.
I'm watching you with great interest.
Ernie
and that last line and image ,..wonderful effect ..
hope you are feeling better dear
Your creativity will always heal Bhawana...
Bless you dear. I'm thinking of you.
You certainly had a lot of key words.
And a tremendous use of key! i hope Ernie was counting!
this is great,BBBB!
Very good writing here!
your creative self/
glad you are feeling better... take care my friend...
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