by Miz Lynn aka/BooBoo
Member since:
February 9, 2006

Spirit - Cinquain

February 01, 2008 03:20 AM EST
views: 100 | rating: 10/10 (14 votes) | comments: 18
   

Spirit,
Leading me through
Errant valleys of life.
Pathways pardoned, purified souls.
Holy.
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Comments: 18

Bethany C. Feb 1, 2008, 3:30am EST
Beautiful imagery. Beautiful truth.
Jim Ross Feb 1, 2008, 3:33am EST
Beautiful, Lynn.
lets hope the rest of my day is this peaceful. nice job, lynn!
Apryl Just Apryl Feb 1, 2008, 7:18am EST
Beautiful Lynn!!!!
Lawrence U. Feb 1, 2008, 7:23am EST
Very nice, Lynn!
Jenn G. Feb 1, 2008, 7:38am EST
beautiful!
Mariana T. Feb 1, 2008, 12:08pm EST
Dear Lynn - short and sweet message...well-done. Salud.
John L. Feb 1, 2008, 2:13pm EST
very nicely done
Sue * Feb 1, 2008, 5:24pm EST
This is so simple, and yet says so much. Lovely.
Serina Matteson Feb 1, 2008, 6:31pm EST
Lynn, this was very beautiful.
Amanda "middle of nowhere" C. Feb 2, 2008, 2:31am EST
Very nice. I might print this out to keep near my computer if you don't mind.
Christine P. Feb 3, 2008, 8:22am EST
You said so much in this beautiful poem My favorite verse, 'leading me through'. You let the Holy spirit lead you through many valleys. LY.
What wonderful work you can do. I love you poems, so inspirational and truly from the heart.
necee t. Feb 8, 2008, 11:47am EST
this is beautiful Lynn... wonderful cinquain... Blessings always...

thanks for your nice comments...
arlene (no shame in my game) w. Feb 16, 2008, 9:50am EST
Very nice Lynn!
Patrick H. Apr 5, 2008, 12:45pm EDT
amen
Erica Hidvegi Jun 29, 2008, 4:17pm EDT
What is the difference between a 'cinquain and a haiku ' ? I liked it because this evoked such a poignant visual.Image Hosting by PictureTrail.comLove is 'Good Luck Eternal'

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