Awesome
[for JH and JH ]
You took me back to a place of fairy tales
Of daughter father love
Of Camelot and knights and chiefs
The bonding
Eyes that do not lie
Words spoken true
Immense diversity -- we two
Dog cat -- spat spat spat
We are impenetrable
Bound past glue.
. . .Out there
In that world
We do
And get done to
It's alright
Because you are
Forever
For me
To come
Home to!
~~~~>Nalita<~~~~
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This time?
The roses are for YOU!
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OF EYES THAT DO NOT LIE"
WOW!! WOZZA!! NUFF SAID... :)
Well Written Lady N.
Thanks for sharing
Thank you for the appreciation. Share it with your loved ones, if you feel this way about them!
Because of love and caring -- and that is all.
It is. . .AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
HMMMMMMMM... Sounds as if things are progressing despite my admonitions. Does he know I'm watching him? He does now.
Well, I am real happy to see this and hope I see much more.
Was this written with your right hand?
Nice work.
Why would I become angry with you, mmmm? Your questions were straightforward. If only everyone would be as truthful and straightforward. . .I meant for the roses to be peach-coloured, but the more I eye them the less peachy they appear. That reminds me. . .
Let me know if you have any other questions, Baiden.
Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!!
I know the person for whom it was written liked it. The added bonus is that all of you do as well. Thank you.
now get back to writing more right handed love poems
Should it be for the same, exact person, do you think?
Let me know. I would be most interested in knowing what you think about THAT ONE, okay?
So go ahead and 'Suki Suki" now !