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John Harris Beck Jan 25, 2008, 11:42pm EST

Very strong images, especially, somehow, the last line.

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manoj sanyal Jan 26, 2008, 1:00am EST

Thanks John Beck. Happy that you liked.

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J W. Jan 26, 2008, 1:37am EST

good poem

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Richard B. Jan 26, 2008, 10:06am EST

That image is very sad too me Manoj

Good work tho

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manoj sanyal Jan 26, 2008, 10:52pm EST

Thanks J Wright.
Thanks Richard.
Thanks for appreciation.
Have nice time.

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Founding Editor Jan 27, 2008, 2:14pm EST

Very powerful writing.

Thanks!

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manoj sanyal Jan 27, 2008, 10:12pm EST

Thanks for appreciation.

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vijay kumar Feb 9, 2008, 12:46pm EST

Powerful imagery. Stunning work.

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manoj sanyal Feb 12, 2008, 6:48am EST

Thanks for appreciation.
Have nice time.

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John F Walter Feb 20, 2008, 5:10pm EST

I like the contrast between the title and the ¨skeletal nature¨of the death carapace; it is as if death mocks our evolution up from invertebrate to vertebrate.

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manoj sanyal Feb 21, 2008, 9:17am EST

Thanks John for reading and commenting.
Take care and be well.

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