by Miz Lynn aka/BooBoo
Member since:
February 9, 2006

Dead to Me You Say - Poetry

January 22, 2008 12:48 PM EST
views: 94 | comments: 32

"Dead to Me." you say?
Think not, for the tie that binds
Called love is unconditional.

Do you not know razor sharp words,
Blame games pour from the lips of insecure men?
Courage in retreat, clamoring for righteousness.
You fail in your own self wrought destruction.
Discontented, distressed and searching
Answers already known, a cowards denial.
For it takes courage to stand before God's mirror
To stare into a heart with honest eyes and
Gaze upon a guilty man.
Reflections of guilt, remorse, stare back at you. 
Hinder not the conviction upon your heart.
For mercy, forgiveness, and love await
Your restless, angry soul.

 "Dead to Me" you say?
Think not, for the tie that binds
Called love is My resurrection.
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Comments: 32

Debbie G. Jan 22, 2008, 12:58pm EST
Lynn, this is potent, and profound. I like it a lot!
Christine P. Jan 22, 2008, 1:06pm EST
He says these hateful words out of fear, doubt and discouragement. He is running from God and those who love him the most. He knows deep down in his heart that their are so many who love and care for him. We know God answers prayer and one day he will have conviction upon his heart.
This is so beautifully written and shows so much love that you have for this man. LY
Deb J. Jan 22, 2008, 1:15pm EST
Lynn, this is written very well!
Apryl Just Apryl Jan 22, 2008, 1:46pm EST
Lynn, there is so much power in the Love of a parent and the love our Father bestows upon us. There is no such thing as dead when it comes to this. There is so much Power in this poem. I believe it is the most beautiful piece I have read in a long time.

Outstanding!!!!
Miz Lynn aka/BooBoo Jan 22, 2008, 1:57pm EST
Deb - The cries of my heart fall upon deaf ears.

Christine - Only one prayer left for God to hear, I wait, knowing this will happen, in His time.

Deb - Thanks!

Apryl - This poem came straight from my heart, he knows better, but yet continues his way toward both God and I, justifying his actions and words of blame. Its not the first time this has happened, he always returns and I'm trusting God to act upon his hardened heart this time once and for all! Ever heard the expression, "we love our children with unconditional love, but we sometimes don't like them."? This stands true.
M. Bradley McCauley McCauley Jan 22, 2008, 2:30pm EST
So much to consider, to ponder and sense. To read again, for a whole new meaning might emerge. Well written, deeply moving. Good job.

And thanks my friend for reading and commenting on my coincidence article. I'll post more of them tomorrow.
M. Bradley McCauley McCauley Jan 22, 2008, 2:30pm EST
Gave you a 10--would give you another if I could rate again.
Kel (Brazilian Nut) G. Jan 22, 2008, 2:38pm EST
Lynn that is a beautiful poem. I know you hurt but God conforts our hearts and gives us strength in times like this. Just remember that grater than our own sorrow is God's sorrow, believe me He is grieving with you right now. Just keep him in your prayers, pray for his soul everynight, and sit and watch as God does the rest. Remember He is merciful and always calls His sheep back.
Miz Lynn aka/BooBoo Jan 22, 2008, 2:39pm EST
Reena - Thanks for commenting!

Mary - Your sense of perception is correct as it was written in two perspectives. Thanks so much for rereading....((((((hugs)))))))
So deep Lynn and beautifully written.
Shaunee C. Jan 22, 2008, 6:49pm EST
Very good and true great poem
Angie O. Jan 22, 2008, 7:19pm EST
Powerful, emotional and just so damn good Lynne. Remember, what falls on deaf ears now sometimes is realized in future times. Gentle hugs.
Jim Ross Jan 22, 2008, 9:33pm EST
Boo, you have the incredible gift of being able remain focused and fluent while suffering pains caused by this person's actions. With any modicum of sensitivity on the person's part, hopefully a reconcilliation will occur. Know that your poem is very good; a powerful conviction of facing the truth. Be well, be happy.
Mark M. Jan 22, 2008, 10:35pm EST
Hi Lynn,
The resurrection (which you mention) and its power is limitless and irresistable. Our God brings life forth where there previously was none!
Thank you for sharing this part of your life through your riveting poem. There are many prayers that will follow in its wake.
-Mark
Bethany C. Jan 22, 2008, 11:44pm EST
You know that I will be praying.
I loved your poem, Lynn.
I hate that you had to suffer.
But a powerful message has surely been born of this trial. I'm certain it will help others who are going through similar things.
It's easy for me to say that God will fix this while I'm not the one going through it.
But be encouraged. Be encouraged. All of the family of God, who know of your pain, are pulling with you.
Alison Pearce Jan 23, 2008, 12:25am EST
Very powerful!
Apryl Just Apryl Jan 23, 2008, 12:45am EST
Lynn, I know the expression and the feeling too well. You know of my estrangement from my daughter. I had to finally let go and let God. I can't parent her any longer but her heavenly Father can and I trust he will. It's all I can do. You are in my thoughts and prayers.
Jenn G. Jan 23, 2008, 7:52am EST
Lynn, this is a very well written poem that is very powerful. Wonderful job! Definatly leaves one something to think about for sure. I am sorry that you are going through this, but know that there are people here for you whenever you need.
Wonderful work here Lynn. Thanks for sharing another one of your talents with us. Also thanks for stopping in and commenting on my article Louisiana's New Governor. I would have died laughing at your dh cajun tongue!
Robert D. Jan 24, 2008, 1:03am EST
Incredibly well written and so poignant, knowing that you are going through the pain you write. I thank God for your faith in Him. When you've done all that is humanly possible, put it in His hands. I will be praying for both of you.
holy moly! Where did that come from?? Excellent!
Sherine W. Jan 25, 2008, 4:00pm EST
Your heart's cry has been beautifully written
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Jan 25, 2008, 4:15pm EST
WONDERUL WORK LYNN..I AM GLAD THAT I READ THIS..KEEP WRITING...
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Jan 25, 2008, 9:13pm EST
I am honored Lynn...Really

Love
Amanda "middle of nowhere" C. Jan 26, 2008, 9:31pm EST
Strong and straight-to-the-point. I like it. You are so talented you should consider an anthology. They usually don't make much, but I think all of your gather fans could make it profitable for you.
Donna Besso Jan 28, 2008, 2:14pm EST
This is powerful.
Mariana T. Jan 30, 2008, 1:44pm EST
Lynn - sending love,prayers and blessings your way - regardless of the poem's subject - it's well-written and from the heart - beautiful. Thank you. Salud.
Kathryn E. Jan 30, 2008, 7:53pm EST
Razor sharp, my dear.
Anne Marie A. Jan 31, 2008, 6:46pm EST
Your poem literally gave me chills while I was reading it Lynn! Very Powerful!
William Dotani Feb 19, 2008, 5:00pm EST
Your poem shows a powerful resolve to stand up for your own heart against those who only wish to hurt and deceive. I really liked the line, 'Courage in retreat, clamoring for righteousness.'
Shelbia C. Oct 19, 2008, 12:57am EDT
This is deep and very powerful

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