The Shape of Things To Come

The eyes are burning, a representation of the soul on fire.

Nothing calms it down; nothing can put it out.

The soul burns faster than anything I know.

Hearts are torn apart in a span of minutes.

Blood ceases to flow and the organs begin to shut down.

Malice resides in the marrow of our bones.

Pumping. Cycles. Harsh tones.

Cease and desist.

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Danielle A. Jan 21, 2008, 11:58pm UTC

Thank you for the comment Bradley.

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Wade A. Jan 22, 2008, 9:08am UTC

Very R.S. Thomas like. Very visual in its context. Kudos to you my love!

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Danielle A. Jan 23, 2008, 11:58am UTC

Thank you Wade.

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Wade A. Feb 3, 2008, 4:57am UTC

Your love is waiting for you to voice the soul he so loves to see you put to words...
XO

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Trista (Break this bittersweet spell on me) W. Feb 4, 2008, 9:02pm UTC

I like this alot...it has a vey dark feeling to it.

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Danielle A. Feb 9, 2008, 8:46pm UTC

Wade - You are the most amazing sweetest man in the whole universe.
I love you.

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Danielle A. Feb 9, 2008, 8:46pm UTC

Thank you for the kind words Trista.

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La Bellota Mar 5, 2008, 4:04pm UTC

you know what. i stand by what i said before. if you are close enough to see all these things then i think that you have a brave heart. and if you weather that storm.....i think that you will find that the seas are yours to navigate....and that they will wecome it. because one cannot do without the other.

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Danielle A. Mar 7, 2008, 9:05pm UTC

Heather I feel as though I myself am the storm. I hate that.

Yin yan.

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Danielle A. Mar 7, 2008, 9:05pm UTC

Ceena Thank you very much! I am glad you liked it!!

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