No sir that girl is not a mad.

I think in a poem every single word and line has to work ... it has to be there, or why take up precious space? That's why I think it's not good technique to have the title of the poem and the 1st line of the poem be the same. Already you're telling the reader to feel free to skip over the first line of the poem. And the first line of the poem is the title. When writers do this, it strikes me that perhaps they just don't have enough interest in their own poem to come up with a title that truly does the poem justice. Also, while I understand the value in using words differently, they still have to work. I don't think 'let her respite' works ... how does on 'respite'? Isn't it a noun. I could be wrong. I love 'garden of purple daffodil' .... an unexpected, fresh image, something visual offered up to the reader in a poem that otherwise just tells too much. The capital letters throw me, too. Why capitalize? Is it to make the poem look attractive on the page? The use of capitalization and punctuation in a poem should be there to serve each and every line. The capital letters at the start of each line serves as a bump each time one is used. It almost stops, and certainly slows, the reader. Create that wonderful world of purple daffodils and rides on milky unicorns without all those speed bumps. That's what I want to read more about, and it's not there.

i liked it , i know a grl like that...

well well. abbie had an opinion. I loved it.

Yes. This is the path I have chosen and developed muses