by Pat M.

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January 12, 2007

Hunting (Rictameter, part 1)

January 18, 2008 03:53 AM EST (Updated: January 18, 2008 05:45 AM EST)

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Hunter

holds his breath and

squeezes, watching, smiling.

Pure physics in action: windage,

trajectory, elevation, impact

make a perfect shot, a clean kill.

He delights that it is

good to be a

hunter.

This is the first of a pair of rictameters. Part 2 is here

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Ron (in complete sheeple overload) W. Jan 18, 2008, 6:48am EST

OK, dead eye. Ten and off to 2

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Greg Schiller Jan 18, 2008, 10:21am EST

The shot.

Very well done.

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Paul M. Jan 18, 2008, 10:58am EST

This makes me want to crank up some Ted Nugent.

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Jim Ross Jan 18, 2008, 4:03pm EST

The sparceness of rictameter really works well with this pulsing, focused moment, Pat. Loved it.

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Janna O'Donnell Jan 27, 2008, 4:25pm EST

Nice job. It's nice to see you back, Pat.

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Kamran Qureshi Feb 18, 2008, 7:47pm EST

Hey Pat:) - Thanks for the rictameter. I enjoyed it.

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