Limbo
I
The place was real, existing in my mind
And in the minds of classmates who believed
That certain blameless souls must be confined
There, waiting for their state to be relieved.
For me the place was grey and filled with slots:
A vast and murky, silent honeycomb,
Where whitish souls lay helpless, as in cots,
Their time spent dreaming endlessly of home.
The place was real, real as a distant land.
As real as Heaven, Purgatory or Hell.
Strange what a trusting child can understand,
Creating mindscapes under teacher's spell.
The place was real, not easy to discard.
I see it still, with angel standing guard.
II
And in imagination I am there,
Existing in that sunless, shadeless place.
I breathe the odourless and tepid air
And glance upon the guarding angel's face
(Whose eyes look through me into depths unknown).
Accepting tacit freedom to explore,
I tread with care across the waxy stone:
A lone embodied soul among the store
Of countless ghostly beings waiting in
Their allocated slots. They cannot know
The mystifying nature of the sin
Incarcerating them in their Limbo.
I quit the place. I shudder with relief
And marvel at the strangeness of Belief.


Comments: 3
It also causes the reader to ponder own the nature of their own entrapments. Very deep....