Bogie
boxer puppy
frolicks in winter grass.
Jelly-beaning practice today
assures perfection, and treats tomorrow.
Pleading eyes, and wrinkled forehead
melting all resistance
future treats for
Bogie

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Debbie G.
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July 16, 2006 Bogie in Poetry
January 13, 2008 01:10 PM EST
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Bogie boxer puppy frolicks in winter grass. Jelly-beaning practice today assures perfection, and treats tomorrow. Pleading eyes, and wrinkled forehead melting all resistance future treats for Bogie ![]()
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Comments: 39
You did a great job Debbie and Bogie is really begining to grow into himself. He is adorable!
nice poem anyway.. ;)
1. Carefully re-read the poem (not being influenced/distracted by any cuteness overloads). You've got the syllable count down perfectly. And you've included a nice pattern of logic to tell an enticing story. I am sure many treats will be forthcoming, for the pup and the poet.
2. This year's list for the AKC Top Ten Favorite Breeds in the US just came out. Boxer is #6. Quel surprise.