Starting from the birth
Life is a journey of nerves
With some timid and active verbs
Through steep and complex curves.
Some hilly and abysmal terrains
Along twists and turns phony
Ensure the travels as adventurous
Using pronouns and nouns many.
We confront some hostilities
While traveling for the futures
But modifying those as adverbs
We continue with right answers.
In spite of all such encounters
Sunny hope always twinkles
And the twilights become clearer
With those adjective sparkles.
With few prepositive measures
And using some conjunctions
We progress with endeavor
And strive along careful actions.
Even after each milestone
The destined journey directs
Amidst twists and turns again
And we act as subjects or objects.
The metaphoric life continues
To new imageries unknown
With different poetic synonyms
But the final journey is just alone.
copyright @ Manoj Krishna Sanyal
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Comments: 8
A delightful, innovative verse that revels in unusual rhymes and near rhymes and shows great sophistication throughout.
One of your best on this site, Manoj, which is saying a lot, because you´ve offered us so many unique specimens of your stylish, wholly original poetry!
PS. Thank you for joining the Rictameter Group. I owe you a debt of gratitude for pointing it out to me last year in a rictameter of your own. I look forward to having you posting some poems very soon.
Dear John ... I am very happy that you liked the poem. You really make me strive for more. Thank you.
Dear Jim... Thank you for appreciation of the thought.
My next poem shall be a rictameter and I'll be honored to post that in your group.
Happy New Year and best wishes.
Your poetic company and sparkling poems/thoughts make me sparkle occasionally.
I give credit to you and my friend John who always inspire me to experiment.
Happy that you liked.
Best wishes.