by Tracy L.

Member since:
November 22, 2006

silly me.

January 07, 2008 12:08 PM UTC

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I know what i saw,

desperation.

I know what i saw as i displaced myself,

Was i wrong?

Maybe.

he tricked me.

But i didnt mind.

So now im left thinking of him,

and all he thinks of is conceling his grin.

Find more about: fantasy, crush, love, relationships

Comments: 9

Alta B. Jan 7, 2008, 12:23pm UTC

Good poem.

J W. Jan 7, 2008, 12:25pm UTC

good poem

Tracy L. Jan 8, 2008, 3:27am UTC

drive by???

Tracy L. Jan 8, 2008, 12:03pm UTC

well u lean something every day i guess!

Karolyn Q. Jan 8, 2008, 6:38pm UTC

It is definitely not deserving of a one. I gave you a 10!

Tracy L. Jan 9, 2008, 3:45am UTC

Your loyaty to my work always puts a smile on my face Karolyn Q!!

many thanks x


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