by Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S.
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December 28, 2007

Cherished Growth

January 06, 2008 09:26 AM EST (Updated: January 17, 2008 12:34 PM EST)
views: 43 | comments: 20

I hope to dream

when all else we can do....

Is not for show but

its more joy  to know

               in lieu !

And you know yourself,

the way the thoughts grow

            to evolve !!

The work you do

should give satisfaction,

or else the return will

   make you poor !!!

As the greed for the result

you expect in return,

will bound you to work more

and the value of life acquires

 the unworthy possessions !

What we leave here in this

world after we are gone.....

Is that all we cherish

in worldly life to be

ours own so dear !!!

 

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Comments: 20

Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Jan 6, 2008, 9:29am EST
Wonder who else can day dream.... ? / !!!!
Rose C. Jan 6, 2008, 3:59pm EST
Very nice!
Jerry Kays Jan 6, 2008, 4:22pm EST
:-)
becky soccer mom x1 p. Jan 6, 2008, 6:10pm EST
very nice
Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Jan 7, 2008, 12:22am EST
thank u all to 've ncourage me ....

thanku becky !!!
This is wonderful, Sujata.
Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Jan 8, 2008, 9:06am EST
yes i want ur support 'n' b young !!!!

so that stopping let Julie will all the time.....

Thank u
William Dotani Feb 5, 2008, 4:33am EST
Your poem touches on how important care is and how destructive plain greed is to having a satisfied life. After all, when we look back at what we have done, will it be something we can feel cherishing satisfaction?
Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Feb 7, 2008, 9:48am EST
Wow pinpointed the jist or the essence well....

Thank U W. Dotani
Barbara B. Feb 7, 2008, 1:40pm EST
Hi my friend, I really loved your poem it says many things
that I can relate to. "Hope to dream" "Know yourself" to
"Give satisfaction". Not to store up material things that
will be of no worth when we pass on. I loved that too.
Thank You
Just Me
Barbie
Austin Cushing Feb 7, 2008, 7:55pm EST
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Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Feb 12, 2008, 11:02am EST
I am charmed & graced by ur real words to gain.....

THANK U Barbie !!!
Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Feb 12, 2008, 11:03am EST
Thank U Austin for stopping in so !!!
wiaka's just ... curious Feb 13, 2008, 12:49pm EST
I felt this spoke of FREEDOM to be one self, and that would be the hope we all have.

Blessings
Leah A. Jul 10, 2008, 10:28am EDT
Nice poem.
Quinn (aka Entwife) Blackburn Sep 25, 2008, 3:08pm EDT
beautifully expressed, Sujata
Quinn (aka Entwife) Blackburn Sep 25, 2008, 3:09pm EDT
wishing you laughter

..
U
lynn a. Oct 2, 2008, 4:05am EDT
Your sentiments are so right to me. I agree with you. This is very, very nice.
Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Oct 4, 2008, 9:09am EDT
Thank you my esteemed friends for while visitng

to have enjoyed the growth giving in thus ...

time and gain again worthy me to have reposted !!!
Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Oct 14, 2008, 12:51am EDT
Love to Thank you graciously

Dear Iynn ...!!!

Dear Leah ...!!!

Dear Quinn ...!!!

Dear wiaka's just .....curious ...!!!

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