Flight # 244

Flight # 244

Heading home.

Sunset streaking my eyes,

surrounding the skies and me,

over state, after state.

Clouds dressed; purples, pinks, grays, reds -

brush-stroked on heaven.

Juxtaposed by billowy clouds,

powdering my face.

Glints of Gold filtering through my thoughts

over wings of steel.

Above it all;

I Am.

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Magi the magical poet is riding the wind again Dec 12, 2007, 4:48am EST

This really is lovely, Cathryn, with an ending that has power.

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Cathryn flowers Ritchie Dec 12, 2007, 11:40pm EST

why are only one or two people commenting on my stuff. i know some of my recent stuff is really good? after my son's wedding on sat. i'll spend more time trying to figure this out. cathryn

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Magi the magical poet is riding the wind again Dec 14, 2007, 4:35am EST

Cathryn, the secret to being read on Gather is to first comment on the work of others...and then to connect to them. You have to establish a presence via your comments. Then comes the joining of groups. It all takes time...don't give up!

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