by Juan J Martinez

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November 9, 2006

Whispering Secrets

December 10, 2007 05:10 PM EST (Updated: December 10, 2007 05:11 PM EST)

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A soft cool ocean breeze blows in whispering secrets

which only her soul can hear or understand

beckoning to her the voices sing a haunting melody

join us and forever you shall be free

Tags: write, desire, heart, alone, breeze, love, poetry, need, poet, wind, love lost, create, secrets, women

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Comments: 9

Donna Besso Dec 10, 2007, 5:37pm EST

I like that alot!!

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Peter Joseph Swanson Dec 10, 2007, 5:39pm EST

10 !!!

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Fran S. Dec 10, 2007, 5:54pm EST

its beautiful

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Alison Pearce Dec 10, 2007, 6:06pm EST

Loved it!

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Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Dec 10, 2007, 6:58pm EST

only her soul can understand ..how powerful...hope you are enjoying..

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Maria G. Dec 11, 2007, 7:30am EST

A beautiful, haunting, almost hypnotic piece...
It could mean freedom or it could mean a sad end....depending on the mood and predisposition of the reader.
I really enjoyed it.

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Cecile V. Dec 11, 2007, 1:42pm EST

Beautiful!

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Curt L. Dec 11, 2007, 2:40pm EST

Lovely, Juan!

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J W. Dec 12, 2007, 1:57pm EST

good work

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