by Sue D.
Member since:
December 16, 2006

find your way home

December 08, 2007 02:02 PM EST
views: 83 | rating: 9.9/10 (28 votes) | comments: 37

 

I will stay by your side on the darkest day

when your best intentions are not enough

lost in shadows I'll help you find your way

I'll stay by your side when it don't come easy

 

 I will help you remember my love is inside you.

When the days are gray and you've lost your light

the days seem hopeless and don't know what to do

I'll remind you of the peace of home.

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Comments: 37

BellaTwine 23 Dec 8, 2007, 2:05pm EST
This is so beautiful and well written! I love it!
necee t. Dec 8, 2007, 2:16pm EST
sooo beautiful... tears are coming... Blessings...

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Alison H. Dec 8, 2007, 2:29pm EST
Lovely....like a song.
Mariana T. Dec 8, 2007, 2:30pm EST
I love this Miz Sue - it's beautiful! Salud.
PEACEOWORK :) Dec 8, 2007, 2:41pm EST
Very nice. :)
Bethany C. Dec 8, 2007, 3:26pm EST
I like this a lot.
Swimming With The Tide O. Dec 8, 2007, 3:37pm EST
This is fabulous. I love it!
Heather W. Dec 8, 2007, 3:48pm EST
Very nice
K D. Dec 8, 2007, 3:59pm EST
This is lovely. A very good description of devotion.
Kay M. Dec 8, 2007, 5:20pm EST
Very nice
Sassy ... the calm and cool Cat Dec 8, 2007, 8:49pm EST
Wonderful! Very touching.
Sue D. Dec 8, 2007, 9:25pm EST
Thank you for all of your kind comments.
Marie J. R. Dec 8, 2007, 10:09pm EST
Oh, my dear,,, this is so wonderful,,,
Tom C. Dec 8, 2007, 11:08pm EST
sue - this is such a lovesong for the one who needs you. Your resilience, your commitment, and your faith in the sanctuary of home makes this a stirring poem. Great work!
Sandra T. Dec 8, 2007, 11:28pm EST
Wonderful poem!
Ellie !. Dec 9, 2007, 1:43am EST
Beautiful. Well written. A good friend to have, indeed!



I am so behind! I like to keep up on what my "friends" have posted...and check out the people who have commented on my stuff...and check out what new has been posted by anyone. BUT, after a week away, I am so behind. Click and comment, Click and comment, Click and comment, Click and comment, Click and comment!
Teresa L. Dec 9, 2007, 2:35am EST
"I will help you remember my love is inside you."

I really like this line.

Beautiful
So beautiful!

Thank you so much for sharing, this came at just the perfect moment for me
Sophie S. Dec 9, 2007, 5:21am EST
Home. Beautiful

Read that you needed some extra Gather love.
Wishing you a Merry Christmas, Besos!
Ron (in complete sheeple overload) W. Dec 9, 2007, 5:38am EST
Awesome

On a mission, can't talk now, Trying to give fifty points (at least) to all my connections for Christmas, or whatever:

Ten unsolicited points from the world's worst connection. Merry whatever you celebrate!
Denise B. Dec 9, 2007, 8:59am EST
lovely :)
Melinda ~choosing happiness~ S. Dec 9, 2007, 10:24am EST
What beautiful words!
Kayleigh M. Dec 9, 2007, 11:43am EST
I really enjoyed this, it is so well written. Bravo :)
Kathy W. Dec 9, 2007, 1:04pm EST
This would be like the most awesome marriage vow.
Or the best toast to friendship or sisterhood that I have ever heard.
Good on you. I think it's beaut.
Wilka
Fly-by Ten Pointing
Merry EVERY LITTLE THING YOU CELEBRATE BETWEEN OCTOBER 1 AND JANUARY 31...
Sue D. Dec 9, 2007, 1:10pm EST
This was written for my bipolar son. I want to thank everyone for your kind comments.
Shannon W Dec 9, 2007, 3:54pm EST
That's beautiful Sue. I always wished I could write poetry well.
Birdee F. Dec 9, 2007, 4:45pm EST
That is so great! Now that I know who it is written for that is amazing! ;o)
Mariana T. Dec 9, 2007, 5:57pm EST
hi Miz Sue - I read it again and it has the same impact - wonderful! SAlud.
Victoria H. Dec 9, 2007, 6:55pm EST
Awesome, Sue. I'd like to have someone in my life that felt that way about me.
Lisa (I love loons) C. Dec 9, 2007, 7:09pm EST
I came by to see your wonderful post - I know that you're needing it the most
I hope that you'll do the same for me - and then we can all be happy!
A 10 for you! Happy Holidays to you, too!
Corina Carrasco Dec 9, 2007, 8:32pm EST
What a special poem! This is truly a wonderful one.
Dena Straughn Dec 10, 2007, 1:04am EST
so beautiful
blessed is the person this is written for
William M. Dec 10, 2007, 11:36am EST
Very nice, Sue.
Toni V. Dec 12, 2007, 2:32pm EST
Very well written Sue.
Curt L. Jan 6, 2008, 2:09pm EST
Lovely and a 10!

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