by Sensational Sadie Sexy Senior Sitizen
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August 5, 2006

Snow Surprise (Haiku)

December 07, 2007 11:06 AM EST
views: 52 | comments: 18

Last noght when I went to bed the new snow was undisturbed.  This morning when I looked out hundreds of rabbit tracks created patterns on the once pristine snow. 

 

Snow Surprise 

 

A pristine snow  night

Changed this morning by rabbit

Tracks dotting the snow
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Comments: 18

Lucky Stars Dec 7, 2007, 11:27am EST
Nice Haiku, Audrey! You tell a story in a few words.
Cindie B. Dec 7, 2007, 11:30am EST
Very nice.
Lyn Owen Dec 7, 2007, 11:33am EST
I like the image you've written
Sammie B. Dec 7, 2007, 11:35am EST
Beautiful haiku! It's got a great wintery feel to it. ^_^
Lisa E. Dec 7, 2007, 11:50am EST
Great haiku! That first snow fall is so lovely.

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Amanda C. Dec 7, 2007, 12:05pm EST
very nice haiku! TFS~
Sarah (I want points) Dec 7, 2007, 1:23pm EST
This is a good one! I love fresh snow when there's no tracks.
Gigi K. Dec 7, 2007, 1:33pm EST
Great imagery in your haiku!
Shaunee C. Dec 7, 2007, 2:36pm EST
Sounds wonderful great haiku
Lynn R. Dec 7, 2007, 3:14pm EST
Winter wonderland. Love it, hate winter. Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!
jessie voigts Dec 7, 2007, 3:22pm EST
GREAT haiku!! i love it!
Denise B. Dec 7, 2007, 4:30pm EST
NICE
Brenda (square peg in a round hole) H. Dec 7, 2007, 5:34pm EST
nice haiku
Heather W. Dec 7, 2007, 6:38pm EST
Very nice
donna h. Dec 7, 2007, 10:15pm EST
very good
I love seeing the rabbit tracks. We've had coyote and mountain lion tracks this past week. Lately, first thing in the morning, my pistol goes outside with me and the Giz.

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