HAYA RECOGNISES THE FLYER
After a while, her attention was drawn to something unusual above her. When she had first spotted it, it had seemed to be fairly small at first. Then it had become progressively larger until it was eventually larger than an eagle. As she stared at it, she could see that, whatever it was, it could fly as well as any bird. It turned, dived and then rose on upward thermal currents as if it was the master of these forces of nature.
As the flying object came closer and closer, she began to make out what it was. "Oh, that's incredible. It's a hang glider. How beautiful!"
It was one that was obviously being controlled by an expert and soon it had drawn near. Near enough for her to realise that the pilot was about to make a landing.
Suddenly she realised that it was quite possible that the pilot had already seen her and had even deliberately performed his sky dance for her benefit. As this possibility flashed through her mind, she was strangely pleased by the thought and even allowed herself a smile.
Then she pulled herself together and murmured softly: "Don't be so damn romantic, Haya. That's not what was been happening up there."
Fortunately, she had been standing between some large boulders and for no good reason, she began to hope that he had not seen her. Somehow, she did not want him to have seen the joy that she had impulsively shown. Confused for a moment and quite aware that she was being silly, she decided to hide.
As she hid herself behind two large boulders, she began to feel a strange but supreme joy at having been a witness to his impeccable flying skills. What she had just seen was in fact a glorious demonstration of her own flying ideals.
When the flyer commenced to swoop towards the plateau, she withdrew deeper into her hiding place. She could just him hovering for a moment and then gently making a perfect landing on the small plateau.
She saw a young man unstrap his flying gear. She noticed his athletic build and his classically handsome yet strong good looks. There was no doubt about it. It was him.
"Oh, my goodness. That can't be. I don't believe it. It's Jason."
She saw him look around quite casually and then find a suitable rock to sit on. He remained there for a moment and then began to whistle a lilting melody.
Haya held her two hands to her mouth. The moment was truly beautiful and her instinct was to run out and greet him. However, some emotion, some kind of reticence or just a desire to play a game, made her choose to stay hidden.
When he stood up and began to do some stretching exercises, she could hardly control her curiosity. She peered between two boulders and watched his every move.
Her heart began to pound as he began to slowly dance, in time to an imagined melody. He stepped, stepped and kicked in one direction and then in the other. He used short steps to make a few turns and then pushed his arms to one side or to the other. He placed on hand on a hip and did a few leg movements.
After a few minutes of these exercises, he walked fairly close to where Haya was hiding and sat down there on another boulder. He took then began to sing softly. She could hear every word.
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"Hey eagles. Let me fly with you.
You swoop and swerve then go back home.
Where did you find your feathered brides?
I too fly yet I'm still alone.
You met your soul mates above the clouds
You dived and soared and caught their eye.
Well, I share your lofty pursuit.
So tell me is my loved one nigh."
Haya, almost overwhelmed by an overpowering emotion, drew in her breath impulsively but had just as quickly covered her mouth. Had he heard her sudden intake of breath? She could not help but take another peek at him.
He had walked over to the edge of the plateau and was looking down. She did not know that he was, in fact, checking the presence and strengths of any upward drafts that were present.
He then zipped up his hang glider harness again and quite suddenly launched himself off the edge of the plateau. She saw him drop away from sight.
Jumping up in alarm she ran over to the ridge where she had last seen him. To her surprise, lifted by a particularly strong updraft, he rose past her to a level high above her. She now stood exposed, easily visible to him and unable to make any attempt to conceal herself. He made three circles above her, wiggled his wings and then flew off rapidly into the distance.
She looked at the departing winged figure for some time. Had that hand motion been a wave? Had he known all the time that she was there? Had he been playing a game? Had it been a courtship or was any significance in the whole event only in her mind?
Deep in thought but feeling an undercurrent of great joy, she turned around and began walking thoughtfully back down the footpath. At the chalet, she found her father waiting for her. He was smiling.
"Hello, my angel. My! Look how happy you are. Did you meet someone special up there?"
She looked at him suspiciously at first.
"So, Papa, what do you know about all this?" she thought.
Then however, she decided to play along with his game. "OK OK Papa. Yes yes I met my dream man. He dropped down from the sky... but never mind that. Tell me about your secret proposal."
"I will do so now, my angel. Let's go inside."
Over breakfast, that morning, father and daughter discussed his grand idea. It was one that she immediately accepted because it fitted so well into her own plans. It also fitted in so well with what she had just witnessed.
As a result of that discussion and many others, Haya enlisted in the military air force on a part-time after-hour basis. It meant that she would be able to complete her studies during normal hours but still gain flying hours on trainer aircraft during late afternoons and weekends.


Comments: 35
Would it be inappropriate to wish you a Happy Thanksgiving here? Too late if it is, I guess. LOL
Well written. I think you are going to be plagued with requests to post the entire book here, Fred. I am waiting for the next chapter!
Thank you for your encouragement. The story is in its opening stages and so not much real drama can be expected. I certainly hope that my writing is going pass beyond the "quite good" stage. What you can be sure of is that the real story will only begin now. All that has happened is that you've met the characters and sized up their relationships.
Thank you agian for your visit.
Thank you for yur very useful and most specific comments. As a result I've made 13 (yes 13) corrections to Chapter 1. I don't know how to thank you for this. Just know that I appreciate it very highly.
Go well dear and happy Thanksgiving to you and yours.
Ah Jason!!! No you can't keep a good man down hahaha.
Thank you for your wishes Marge. Anytime is appropriate for good wishes even if they are late. Please accept mine too.
Of course as a great poet you would enjoy that song. That song plays a big role later on. It has a built in essage that Haya interprets in more than one way.
This story is specifically written for a movie and so the visual effects are very important.
It's an action story and not like my more philosophical writings.
I won't publish all of the chapters of course. I cant hog so much space. I'll publish the next chapter and then one that fits in way later when they're near Simla.
Thank you for being there Minnie. Thank you.
Thanks for the visit. I'm glad that you're there reading away. Once this has been filmed you'll see beautiful shots of Natal and a particularly beautiful part of India.
Let's pause and have a Guinness, shall we?
It's getting interesting. "Hey eagles. Let me fly with you.
You swoop and swerve then go back home.
Where did you find your feathered brides?
I too fly yet I'm still alone is full of desires and longing.You have developed the character of Haya just like what I expected and you as a mind reader gives the best image.Your story is very colorful and attractive.The way you have finished this chapter demands more from you.
This is a wonderful read.
and thank you for your affection and love .
God bless you.You are a beautiful soul .
I guessed it right , it was jason flying like a eagle..simply loved the pictures you have painted ..such vivid description , such rich imagenary...and such delicacy in scenes ...I could almost see Haya hiding like a child and then jason rising above to circle around her before flying away ...it so much like Yash raj movie ...I can see that ..:-)
Good luck for the novel and movie project ...
--Amar
Yes I really WANT my stories to be colourful. I want the reader to be able to live in the story. So it must be almost real but not quite.
I want the reader to feel extended. To want to go just a little further in his life because he/she knows that for the one who has a vision the world is waiting.
I think that you see that and I'm happy about that. Haya is going to thrill every young woman whether Indian or not. Why? What drives her to this...madness????...who knows?
I give my love and affection to my special people without hesitation. As I give I feel the warmth. It's a law of the Universe. Thank you for your words. They always mean a lot.
Yash Raj !!!!! Wow what greater compliment can you give me? Ah...tonight...I'll sleep well. Thank you for the good luck. I'll need it. Bless you.
I'm so glad that you're reading along here. Delighted in fact.
I'm glad that you like my style. It's important to me as a writer that I not only appeal to but really grip the reader.
Thank you Ed.
GOOD NIGHT :)
I certainly feel like a lone wolf when reading the other comments.
My door is open. I'd love you to come and read my stuff.
We don't have the same Thaksgiving day as you have but we know about your view of this day, the gathering of families and the large tables full of joy (and turkey). We think that it's a wonderful celebration.
We celebrate round about this time the Day of the Covenant. On this day we tank God for the way that He helped the early settlers here.
Half the day (morning) is very serious but in the afternoons our families gather and we laugh and joke as if we had never been split up by lifes forces during the year.
Thanks for coming by.
Those are very astute observations. I think that you've seen something that needs explaining. Let me think about it.
In the meantime let me ive it to you in this way. The main protagonists in my story are not Jason nor Haya. If it was, the story would end now. The main player is Destiny who puts the ideal couple together and then seperates them in several cruel ways.
The story is about how strong real love really is. Is it OK to shrug your shoulders and say "oh it's Kismet. Bye bye. You go your way, I'll go mine."
If a movie is made, the first one will be Beloved Tigress and of course you'll see it in the States.
Thanks for speaking about the length. I'll make the next chapter a bit longer.
Be warned...there's a lot of heartache coming. As destiny strikes. Please have a look at my response to Bill's comment above.
You used exactly the key words to highly motivate me.
Yes Haya caught herself in her own trap. Onve she started hiding she felt that she had to go on with the game. But all will be revealed soon...I mean about her hiding.
When I write, there's always romance in the air. Just wait and see.
Well its afternoon there...so I'll say GOOD AFTERNOON BHAWANA...have a brilliant afternoon
You're no lone wolf. You're the wise man who says "hey where do you think you're going with this?"
No sky bridge...but you'll see those eagles again under less happy circumstances.
Just bear in mind please that the main player here is Destiny and Destiny has plans for all three of the main players.
Thank you for your incisive comments. They're great.
Please tell me if there is anything that doesn't work for you. I won't be upset. In fact I'll thank you for it.
I'll do just that...once I've found a suitable quote. It'll go on Page 1 before the story starts.