Sue - Your capture of the emotion here is really good, expressed in the short bursts of language with which you would comfort someone. I think this is really good, I can really feel your comforting tone.
I'm with Wilma!! Nobody to just lean on and sleep and forget the world away with here either. Maybe I could come over with Elsie, we'll each take a shoulder, K?
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Great!
It's a very nice poem, Sue.
Maybe I could come over with Elsie, we'll each take a shoulder, K?
Happy Thanksgiving.