by Lawrence U.
Member since:
January 10, 2007

On the Wings of Destiny

November 14, 2007 05:01 PM EST
views: 134 | rating: 10/10 (37 votes) | comments: 45
   

up with

the sparrows in Findon…

golden dawn

 

on the

wings of Destiny…

i Crossed

the secret river

of time

 

i sat in absolute

silence, immersed in the inner

glow of your being

 

now, you walk

along my dreams with

lustful eyes

charmingly dressed

in vivid pink

 

a long kiss

in the garden of Desire…

tasting your nectar  

 

enlightenment

in ceaseless motion…

nourishing

the mystical flower

of youth

 

   

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Comments: 45

Vivian P. Nov 14, 2007, 5:04pm EST
wonderful poem
Denise B. Nov 14, 2007, 5:08pm EST
very nice
ELLEN B. Nov 14, 2007, 5:29pm EST
That was very nice to read, very good. Ellen B
P.W. Dowdy Nov 14, 2007, 5:32pm EST
Good Day, Lawrence.

You've been missing in action. If you're the example, Adelaide grows well versed "love" poets.

This is one of your best. A very nice command of subject matter.

Pat
Jerri H. Nov 14, 2007, 5:39pm EST
Beautiful poem Lawrence :)
Tina Coruth Nov 14, 2007, 6:01pm EST
Beautifully done.
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Nov 14, 2007, 6:13pm EST
incredible ....loved those vivid images and specially.In other words, you bring it all ALIVE! I just loved the language, the connection to golden dawn to wings of DESTINY.So real ,so engrossing..your ending lines are the most beautiful lines.
Bundy P Nov 14, 2007, 6:40pm EST
Lovely
Deb J. Nov 14, 2007, 6:50pm EST
Very beautiful Lawrence!!
Roberta Moto Nov 14, 2007, 7:01pm EST
nice work
Corinna Parr Nov 14, 2007, 8:07pm EST
You've done a lovely job of capturing how love like this can be both serene and exciting. The image of light, especially... very nice, Lawrence.
Marge H. Nov 14, 2007, 8:10pm EST
Just beautiful!
Autumn Farrington Nov 14, 2007, 8:37pm EST
Very, very romantic, Lawrence. Beautiful imagery!!!
JoAnne D. Nov 14, 2007, 8:58pm EST
Aaaah, youth, very nice piece.
Brenda (square peg in a round hole) H. Nov 14, 2007, 11:04pm EST
nice poem
Carol Roach Nov 14, 2007, 11:05pm EST
this is amazing thank you very much,
Jill~Sexy Back~ V. Nov 15, 2007, 4:33pm EST
that was very beautiful! thanks for sharing!
Anne Marie A. Nov 15, 2007, 7:10pm EST
You have a wonderful gift of incorporating nature into your poems and lovely imagery
Minakshi w. Nov 16, 2007, 12:11am EST
Lawrence, this is tender, mystical and full of an inner beauty...that of your soul.
Sue M. Nov 16, 2007, 12:38am EST
Very nice poem, Lawrence!
Trine Meyer Vogsland Nov 16, 2007, 4:55am EST
What made me go to the article itself was the incredible poetic titles you have on your work. That tickled my imagination. I was not disappointed. the poem continued equally poetic. I felt that I did not even need to understand or realy go int o the content - I could just enjoy the taste and flavours of the language.

Some works do that to me - the phrases itself seduces me and could nearly stand alone in their imagery.

I wish I had that gift :-) because it would be handy for naming my paintings. LOL these days they often get names like "blue bird on tree".hehe
donna h. Nov 16, 2007, 1:39pm EST
nice
Elsie Duggan Nov 17, 2007, 11:49pm EST
I wish you wrote this for me Lawrence, that is how lovely I think it is,
Yvonne F. Nov 18, 2007, 7:21am EST
Beautiful Poem Lawrence
Stephanie A. (On vacation) Nov 18, 2007, 9:17pm EST
Words that dance, very lovely poem.
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Nov 19, 2007, 12:48am EST
Thanks Lawrence for your lovely comments ..Hope you will celebrate a wonderful Thanksgiving..

God bless you

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Kathy D. Nov 20, 2007, 10:15am EST
very nice!
very powerful!
You made me want to hear the details of the rest of the story.
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Nov 21, 2007, 4:56pm EST
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Bonnie S. Nov 22, 2007, 9:14pm EST
That's a nice poem, Lawrence.
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Nov 22, 2007, 11:50pm EST
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Thanks for sharing
Jaye S. Nov 27, 2007, 8:55am EST
beautiful. full of passion and desire.
wiaka's just ... curious Dec 3, 2007, 7:25am EST
Aww; I think love reached up and smacked me in the face. Beautiful.

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Blessings
Quinn (aka Entwife) Blackburn Dec 4, 2007, 6:59am EST
Lyrical
..
U wishing you laughter
Amanda C. Dec 5, 2007, 9:04pm EST
nicely written, lovely poem!

Thanks for sharing!
Lucky Stars Dec 6, 2007, 12:14am EST
Beautiful Poem, Lawrence. You sure have a gift for romantic, sensual love poems with lots of light and color.
Curt L. Dec 15, 2007, 11:49pm EST
Wow! Is this wonderful! A 10!
*Holly *. Jan 23, 2008, 7:04pm EST
Destiny is such a beautiful thing!
*10
Curt L. Jun 26, 2008, 11:54am EDT
Love this poem, Lawrence!
Jerri H. Jun 26, 2008, 1:25pm EDT
Absolutely divine in a say dream way~
Jerri H. Jun 26, 2008, 1:27pm EDT
Absolutely divine in a day dream like way~
Wilma M. Sep 3, 2008, 7:33pm EDT
Very lovely images.
.* Sandi * Nov 4, 2008, 7:09pm EST
Wonderfully done! Lawrence!
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