by aj r.

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October 31, 2007

Never (Don't read unless you read Where's AJ?)

November 12, 2007 05:33 PM EST

views: 19 | rating: 10/10 (11 votes) | comments: 10

Vengence can be described

As a dish never to be eaten

And a cold hatred towards someone

that can never be rightfully beaten

Tags: vengence, aj, life, richman, hate

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Danielle P. Nov 12, 2007, 5:35pm EST

Very deep. Great poem

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Nana to Seven Cutiepies Nov 12, 2007, 5:38pm EST

You have summed it up very nicely!

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Christine P. Nov 12, 2007, 5:51pm EST

Very descriptive poem! Super job.:)

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Alison Pearce Nov 12, 2007, 6:20pm EST

Now this was very good. Short but powerfully worded and vivid. Good job

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donna h. Nov 12, 2007, 7:43pm EST

very good

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Kimberly Ripley Nov 12, 2007, 10:23pm EST

Excellent! I like the fact that your words capture deep feelings!

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Renda B~surviving the storm by dancing in the rain. Nov 13, 2007, 8:23am EST

That's good...and true. Well done.

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Phyllis R. Nov 13, 2007, 11:55pm EST

This is good!

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Otelia S. Nov 15, 2007, 11:32am EST

Look who's back!
Way 2 Go!

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